My holiday
Hello, I'm Emi and Japanese.
Nice to meet you!
I'm wondering what to write, because this is my first time.
I want to talk about my holiday this time.
Totally, I enjoyed my holiday. However it made me tired.
Because I went to Paris this month and all days were heavy rain.
My clothes were everything soggy!
I checked forecast in Paris, but I didn't expect how heavy rain.
It was unfortunate, but I enjoyed French dinner!
I hope go to France again.
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My holiday
Hello, I'm Emi and Japanese. (Hello, I'm Emi from Japan) <-You can also say thisNice to meet you!
I'm wondering what to write, because this is my first time.
I want to talk about my holiday this time.
Totally, I enjoyed my holiday. However it made me very tired.
Because I went to was in Paris all this month and all days were every day there was heavy rain.
My clothes were everything soggy/drenched!
I checked the forecast in Paris, but I didn't expect how the heavy rain.
It was unfortunate, but I enjoyed French dinner!
I hope to go to France again.
For the most part the only problems I saw were just slight errors in grammar but besides that you speak very well for a non-native speaker!
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My holiday
Hello, I'm Emi and Japanese.Nice to meet you!
I'm wondering what to write, because this is my first time.
I want to talk about my holiday this time.
Totally, I thoroughly enjoyed my holiday. However it made me tired.
Because I went to Paris this month and it rained heavily every day all days were heavy rain.
My clothes were everything soggy!
I checked the forecast in Paris, but I didn't expect how such heavy rain.
It was unfortunate, but I enjoyed French dinners!
I hope to go to France again.
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Thank you everyone!
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