Today' diary.
When I walked on the platform, I steped on a moth accidentally.
Although I hate insects, I felt sorry for him.
He looked be struggle to fly.But he couldn't.
I hope he can survive.
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Today' diary.
When I walked on the platform, I steped on a moth accidentally.Although I hate insects, I felt sorry for him.
He looked to be struggle struggling while trying to fly, .B but he couldn't.
I hope he can survives.
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Today' diary.
When I walked on the platform, I steped on a moth accidentally.(normally you would say "while walking on the platform" if it occurred when you were already on the platform, however if it occurred when you first reached the platform it would be better to say "when I stepped onto the platform". For the second part of the sentence, it would be more correct to say "I accidentally stepped on a moth" -- note the spelling of "stepped", it has two "p")
Although I hate insects, I felt sorry for him.
(good! Perfect sentence)
He looked be struggle to fly.But he couldn't.
(he looked like he was struggling to fly, but he couldn't)
I hope he can survive.
( "I hope he survives" would be better)
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