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Translation 1 My mother think that in America you can have anything you want. You could open your own restaurant. You could work in government and receive a good pension. You could buy house without prepayment. You could be reach. And you could be famous. That’s how is starting “Two Kind” a short story written by a famous chine’s american writer Amy Tan. Telling the tale about two culture , story telling about May , a young American girl , whose mother losted everything in China want to realize their dreams through her daughter which she hopes will become a prodigy. However this is story conflict “parent and child” is global , mothers belief in her daughter faith is absolutly American. The idea of American dream go through all our culture you can see it in song of Elvis and Bruce Springsteen in literary works of Scott Fitzgerald and Tennessee Williams and in a lot of our Hollywood movies. Sometimes its shwon like something very positive and that it something you need to attempt to and in other cases it is harshly criticized.

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My mother thinks that in America you can have anything you want. You could open your own restaurant. You could work in government and receive a good pension. You could buy a house without prepayment. You could be reach rich. And you could be famous.
That’s how is starting “Two Kind,” a short story written by a famous chine’s Chinese-American writer, Amy Tan, starts.
Telling the tale about two cultures, story telling about May, a young American girl whose mother losted everything in China and want to realize their her dreams through her daughter which whom she hopes will become a prodigy. [I would recommend you divide this sentence up to make it more easily understood.  Perhaps: Telling the tale about two cultures, it is the story about May and her mother.  May is an American girl and her mother lost everything in China.  Her mother now hopes to realize her dreams through May and she hopes May will become a prodigy].  However this is story of conflict between “parent and child” is global. A mother’s belief in her daughter's faith is absolutly American. [I’m not sure I fully understand what you mean by this.]
The idea of the American dream goes through all our culture and you can see it in the songs of Elvis and Bruce Springsteen, in literary works of F. Scott Fitzgerald and Tennessee Williams, and in a lot of our Hollywood movies. Sometimes it’s shown like as something very positive and that it something you need to attempt to accomplish. And, in other cases, it is harshly criticized.

Nice job Julietta.  I hope I’ve captured the meaning of what you wanted to say!


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