Anorexie mentale
Voici un texte que j'ai écrit en anglais et je voulais savoir si ma syntaxe est bonne et si j'ai des fautes ! Merci
It's not easy to identify anorexia knowing that people make many effort to hide this discorder. To detect anorexia nervosa, several warning signs can be spotted. They can be origin physical, psychological and behavioural.
For that I will mention you the main signs of anorexia in the differents categories mentioned above.
First, i will give you the physical signs. The person may have a rapid weight lost, feeling cold, a slow heartbeat, dizziness, discorder or absence menstruation and repeated vomiting.
Morever, there are the psychological signs. There can be a fear of take weight, a disturbance of the image body, an apprehension during the meals, the difficults of concentration, feeling anxious, depression, a fear to gaining, low self esteem, preoccupation with eating.
Finally, i will give you the behavioral signs. These people use abusive laxative, diuretic. They avoid the calorric and the fatty food, they are obsessed about weight control and reflexion in the miror. They eat in private and adopt an antisocial comportment.
It is necessary to know that it's important to locate the signs of anorexia of as soon as possible to reduce the psychological and physical consequences on the person.
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Anorexie mentale
Voici un texte que j'ai écrit en anglais et je voulais savoir si ma syntaxe est bonne et si j'ai des fautes ! MerciIt's not easy to identify anorexia knowing that considering people make many effort to hide this discorder. To detect anorexia nervosa, several warning signs can be spotted. They can be origin manifest physically, psychologically and behaviourally.
For that Now I will mention describe to you the main signs of anorexia in the differents categories mentioned above.
First, I will give you (You could also say "describe" here.) the physical signs. The person may have a rapid weight loss, feeling cold, experience a slow heartbeat, dizziness, disorder abnormal pattern or absence of menstruation and repeated vomiting. Morever, there are the psychological signs. There can be a fear of take gaining weight, a disturbance distorted perception of the body image body, an apprehension during the meals (Perhaps you mean "hesitancy to eat meals"), the difficults of concentration difficulty concentrating, feeling anxious, depressed, a fear to gaining, low self esteem, and preoccupation with eating.
Finally, i will give you these are the behavioral signs. These people ("These people" reads a bit harshly in English, especially with topics that are stigmatized or not well understood in society. Another way to express the same idea would be something like, "People with anorexia nervosa often") use abusive abuse laxatives and diuretics. They avoid the highly calorric caloric and the fatty food, they are obsessed about weight control and their reflexion in the miror. They eat in private and adopt an antisocial comportment ("Comportment" can be used here but I might choose "demeanor" or "behavior". I think it either of those words might fit better with the style in which you've written this text.)
It is necessary to know that it's important to locate the importance of identifying the signs of anorexia of as soon as possible to reduce the psychological and physical consequences on ("For" would also work here.) the person.
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