Day3:2016.6.13
Congratulation! This is 2nd day you learning English coherently! OK, let's start today's class.
1.It's a bad news.
Allen: Jenny, what's up?
Jenny: It's a bad news, I didn't pass the exam.
Allen: I'm sorry to hear that. If you need some help just let me know.
2.What's the matter?
Allen: Honey, give me a big hug.
Jenny:Oh, what's the matter?
Allen: I just broke up with my boyfiend.
Jenny: Honey, you'll meet a better man at next stop.
3.I'm so happy.
I'm so happy I saved 1000 dollars! I'm a rich weman!
4.Just relax.
Jenny:I'm so nervous! Our first baby!
Allen: Just relax. Think about something interesting.
5.We need to practice.
Allen:Hey, Dad, could you please turn your voice down? We need to practice to singthe song.
Dad:Sorry. I'll do it right now.
6.That was fantastic!
What a amazing team! That was fantastic. This is the best football game I have ever watch.
That's all. Really need your correction. If you need some correction in Chinese, just contact with me.^^
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Day3:2016.6.13
Congratulations! This is the 2nd day you spoke English coherently! OK, let's start today's class.(Coherently refers to being able to express yourself in English in an understandable manner so "learning" won't be applicable.)
1.It's a bad news.
Allen: Jenny, what's up?
Jenny: It's a Bad news, I didn't pass the exam.
(No need to say it's a in the beginning)
Allen: I'm sorry to hear that. If you need some help just let me know.
2.What's the matter?
Allen: Honey, give me a big hug.
Jenny:Oh, what's the matter?
Allen: I just broke up with my boyfiend.
Jenny: Honey, you'll meet a better man at next stop. next time.
3.I'm so happy.
I'm so happy I saved 1000 dollars! I'm a rich weman! woman!
4.Just relax.
Jenny:I'm so nervous! Our first baby!
Allen: Just relax. Think about something interesting. else.
(Use "else" to to help the person relax by diverting their attention.)
5.We need to practice.
Allen:Hey, Dad, could you please turn your voice down? We need to practice to singing this song.
Dad:Sorry. Let me do it right now.
6.That was fantastic!
What an amazing team! That was fantastic. This is the best football game I have ever watched.
That's all. Really need your correction. If you need some correction in Chinese, just contact with me.^^
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