Can anyone correct this letter? (This is my life story2)
I already sent it anyway, but I want to know the correct one.
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My parents told me repeatedly that soon enough I’m going to heal and walk again and could do whatever I wanted to do.
There was specific time right after the accident when I was confused about everything around me because I fainted so that didn’t even remember the accident. So I didn’t trust doctors and nurses or the fact that I got hurt.
My beloved family and friends, they came over to the hospital like everyday so that I’m not bored or depressed
After almost two years, when I almost recovered, I went to the graduate school of journalism in Korea. In the university, they had a Rehabilitation Hospital near a dormitory, so I studied about journalism and also get a physical treatment at the same time. May 2013, I finally got the news that I got a job from the online news agency.
So this is my loooooong story. :]
Now I really appreciate my family, also friends for being with me. It was kind of my turning point to go back to the GOD. (Even though at this moment, I had a little problem with my pastor who was in charge of young people, sometimes don’t go to the church.)
So that was it. It was my long long life story...
Thanks for reading my long story(especially in my poor English ^_T). How's everything with you? I'm more than welcome to hear from you. I wish GOD may be with you always.
Lots of love, Anne from K.
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Can anyone correct this letter? (This is my life story2)
I already sent it anyway, but I want to know the correct one.-------------------
My parents told me repeatedly that soon enough I’m going to heal and walk again and could do whatever I wanted to do.
There was specific time right after the accident when I was confused about everything around me because I fainted so that didn’t even remember the accident. So I didn’t trust doctors and nurses or the fact that I got hurt.
My beloved family and friends, they came over to the hospital like practically everyday so that I’m was not bored or depressed.
After almost two years, when I was almost recovered, I went to attended the graduate school of journalism in Korea. In tThe university, they had a Rehabilitation Hospital near a dormitory, so I studied about journalism and also get a got physical treatment at the same time. May 2013, I finally got the news that I got a job from the online news agency.
So this is my loooooong story. :]
Now I really appreciate my family, also friends for being with me. It was kind of my turning point to go back to the GOD. (Even though at this moment, I had a little problem with my pastor who was in charge of young people and sometimes don’t go to the church.)
So that was it. It was my long long life story...
Thanks for reading my long story(especially in my poor English ^_T). How's everything with you? I'm more than welcome to hear from you. I wish GOD may be with you always.
Lots of love, Anne from K.
Hi Anne - great to overcome your injury and also continue to study English. There were a couple of things around your use of tenses, otherwise it was great!
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