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Topic about Jobs I'm a computer tecnician and I'm working part-time in a Computer Company which has 1200 employees and I'm in charge of the Computer Department and I'm responsible for two people. I do helpdesk support and I do repairs to the computers, printers and other gadgets, it involves doing a lot of overtime. I like my job, but I would like to set-up my own company about web-site design being self-employed and I could work from home and I will be on flexi time, although, I think first I should have experience in this workplace because, I'm inexperienced, such as I've applied for a job in a web design company in other town where there is a vacant. I hope that they will hire me, because I need a change of scene. Additionally my grass income will be more than currently, will get holiday pay and sick pay, and my salary will be 150€ more every month. I'm well-qualified due to I've studied management computer systems and I'm currently studying Development Web Applications and will graduate next year.

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Topic about Jobs

I'm a computer technician and I'm working part-time in a Computer Company which has 1200 employees and. I'm in charge of the Computer Department and I'm responsible for two people. I do helpdesk support and I do repairs to , as well as repairing the computers, printers and other gadgets. It involves doing a lot of overtime.

I like my job, but I would like to set-up my own company about web-site design being and be self-employed and so I could work from home and I will be on flexi time. although However, I think first I should have experience in this workplace because I'm inexperienced, such as for example, I've applied for a job in a web design company in another town where there is a vacant (Can you explain what you want to say here?). I hope that they will hire me, because I need a change of scene. Additionally my gross income will be more than it is currently and I will get holiday pay and sick pay. My salary will be 150€ more every month.

I'm well-qualified due to have studied management computer systems and I'm currently studying Development Web Applications and, Which I will graduate next year.
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I'm a computer tecnician and I'm working part-time in a Computer Company which has 1200 employees and I'm in charge of the Computer Department and I'm responsible for two people. I do helpdesk support as well as  repair the computers, printers and other gadgets/devices/hardware;  it involves (doing) a lot of overtime.   doing/working es un opcion--no tienes que decirlo.  ...as well as repairing the computers... probablamente también está bien

I like my job, but I would like to set-up my own company for web-site design and be self-employed so I could work from home.  That way, my schedule can be more flexible although I think first I should have experience in this workplace because I'm inexperienced.  I've applied for a job in a web design company in other town where there is a vacancy. I hope that they will hire me, because I need a change of scenery. Additionally my gross income will be more than it is currently and I will get holiday pay and sick pay.  Furthermore my salary will be 150€ more every month.

está un poco desubicado. Quieres experiencia en tu trabajo actual pero luego dices que quieres un trabajo en otra ciudad. Igual necesitas experiencia con los dos?

I'm well-qualified due to the fact that I've studied management computer systems and I'm currently studying Development Web Applications and will graduate next year***.  or puedes decir I am well qualified due to having studied.....  pero lo siento, otra correción, "due to have studied" de hecho no es correcto.   Due to needs un substantivo simple o gerundio.  Due to solo no puede acepta una clausula.  

No puedes decir   I am well qualified to due to that I studied... tienes que cambiarlo I am well qualified due to the fact that....

Puedes tambien dccir I am well qualified due to studying for 2 years under Professor Smith. 

*** has escrito correctamente. No necesitas cambiar nada pero otra manera es decir Applications and from which I will graduate next year 

 

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