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5 sentences Can you correct my post please. Many thanks in advance Hey there? How are you doing? What's your weather like? Over here, it's become a bit chilly and rainy. I hope you and your family are doing great. My son is growing up fast and soon he will be 3 months. He is doing well. He is quite demanding, wanting to be held in arms all day long. If I want to wake him up I simply put him in his cot. He likes to sleep on top of me. I am exhausted a bit from sleepless nights. He wakes me up several times a night. He is quite a good calm boy and tends to get agitated when I leave him alone in his cot.

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5 sentences Can you correct my post, please. Many thanks in advance

Hey there!
How are you doing? What's your weather like? Over here, it's become a bit chilly and rainy.
I hope you and your family are doing great.
My son is growing up fast and soon he will be 3 months. He is doing well. He is quite demanding, wanting to be held in my arms all day long. If I want to wake him up I simply put him in his cot. He likes to sleep on top of me.
I am a bit exhausted a bit from sleepless nights. He wakes me up several times during the night. He is quite a good calm boy and tends to get agitated upset when I leave him alone in his cot.
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5 sentences Can you correct my post please. Many thanks in advance

Hey there,


How are you doing? What's your weather like (today)?

Over here, it's become a bit chilly and rainy. > It's beocoming a bit chilly and rainy.
I hope you and your family are doing great.
My son is growing up fast, and soon he will be 3 months old.

He is doing well. He is quite demanding, and he wants to be held in my arms all day long.

He is quite demanding, wanting to be held in my arms all day long > okay , if he is being demanding just for this reason.

When I want to wake him up, I simply put him in his cot. ( Use "when" if this is what you normally do , as in "when I reach my doorsteps , I always take off my shoes) Use "if " when it's something you think you will do.

He likes to sleep on top of me.
I am a bit exhausted a bit from sleepless nights.

He wakes me up several times a night. He is quite a good calm boy but tends to get agitated when I leave him alone in his cot. (Use "but" to indicate a difference from what you just said : a good calm boy.

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5 sentences Can you correct my post please. Many thanks in advance

Hey there!
How are you doing? What's your weather like? Over here, it's become a bit chilly and rainy.
I hope you and your family are doing great.
My son is growing up fast and soon he will be 3 months. He is doing well. He is quite demanding, wanting to be held in my arms all day long. If I want to wake him up I simply put him in his cot. He likes to sleep on top of me.
I am exhausted a bit from sleepless nights. He wakes me up several times a night. He is quite a good calm boy and tends to get agitated when I leave him alone in his cot.

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