introduction (important) Hi, there Could you please help me with this paper introduction? It is about psychology. "On the basis of guidelines of cultural-historical psychology and critical pedagogy, this paper analyzes theoretically the role of schooling in the development of personality during adolescence. To do so, we drew on Vygotski's works, as well as those of Leontiev, Luria and Elkonin, among other authors who contributed and still contribute to formation of cultural-historical psychology. This study also provides cultural-historical psychology's perspective on adolescent personality, stressing the relevance of school practices to the personality development during adolescence" Please, tell me the errors. I really need help! Thabk you so much