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The Trip In The Kyusyu Area Of Japan Day1 I and my husband went to Kyusyu by airplane. There is my husband's parent's home. Day 1, We took a 9:30 flight from Tokyo to Fukuoka and arrived at 11:30. After we rode the subway and arrived Tenjin station. We ate Udon noodle for lunch and took a walk around Tenjin station. After a while, we got on highway bus and arrived at highway bus stop near his parent's home. His father came to pick up us by car and we arrived at his house at 4 o'clock pm. And we spent a time talked each other and playing some instruments with them to dinner. After the dinner, whole the family could watch fireflies just a little. They can live one week to two week. Their life is transitory. And I took a walk around the house and it was late at night.

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My husband and I* went to Kyusyu by airplane. My husband's parent's home is there.**
Day 1, we took a 9:30 flight from Tokyo to Fukuoka and arrived at 11:30. Afterwards, we rode the subway and arrived at Tenjin station. We ate Udon noodle for lunch and took a walk around Tenjin station. After a while, we got on a motor coach*** and arrived at the bus stop near his parent's home. His father came to pick up us by car and we arrived at his {or their, if both parents} house at 4:00 pm.
And Then we spent a time talking to each other and playing some instruments with them to until dinner. After the dinner, the whole the family could watched fireflies for (just) a (little) while.**** They can live one a week to two weeks. Their life is transitory. And Then I took a walk around the house and it was late at night.


*In English, we put ourselves last.

**Or "There, my husband's parents' home can be found". Also, is it one parent or both parents. If both, then parents' house.

***We don't really say "highway bus", but to differentiate it from the city/town bus, we will say motor coach.

****"For a while" sounds better, but "just a little while" is fine.

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The Trip In The Kyusyu Area Of Japan Day1

My husband and I went to Kyusyu by airplane. My husband's parents live there. On the first day we took a 9:30 flight from Tokyo to Fukuoka and arrived at 11:30. Then we rode the subway and arrived at Tenjin station, we ate Udon noodle for lunch, and took a walk around Tenjin station. After a while, we got on the highway bus and arrived at the highway bus stop near his parent's home. His father came to pick us up by car and we arrived at his house at 4 o'clock pm. 
We spent time talking to each other and playing instruments with them at dinner. After dinner the whole family watched fireflies for just a little while. Fireflies can live one to two weeks. Their life is transitory. I also took a walk around the house late at night.




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