Essay: Education polishes good natures and corrects bad ones
Nowadays, education is really important. It is said that education make good people better and correct bad ones.
In my opinion, this statement makes sense, however, education does not always work like that.
On the one hand, education socialize people. At school we learn respectfully communicate with each other. We study rules of morality there as well.
Furthermore, education always involves a competition because we try to be better than our classmates. Plus, teachers train us to cope with different problems and as everyone knows what does not kill us it makes us stronger.
On the other hand, some people are convinced that education cannot make a human responsible or hard-working so it has nothing to do with developing person's character.
I disagree with that. Even though a lot of things depend only on a person, sometimes education can greatly help, for example, aids realize what a person is interested in. It is great when a person knows his place in life.
To sum up, I would like to say that even if an education cannot completely change someone, at least it benefits.
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Essay: Education improves the character of a good person and corrects poor character
In my opinion, this statement makes sense, however, education does not always work like that.
On the one hand, education socializes people. At school we learn to respectfully communicate with each other. We study rules of morality there as well.
Furthermore, education always involves a competition because we try to be better than our with our classmates. Plus, teachers train us to cope with different problems and as everyone knows what does not kill us it makes us stronger.
On the other hand, some people are convinced that education cannot make a human responsible or hard-working so it has nothing to do with developing a person's character.
I disagree with that. Even though a lot of things depend on the choices an individual makes only on a person, sometimes education can greatly help, for example, aids realize what a person is school can help a person discover interests and talents. It is great when a person knows finds his place in life.
To sum up, I would like to say that even if an education cannot completely change someone, at least it offers benefits.
Nice entry Alya! :)
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Essay: Education polishes good natures and corrects bad ones
Nowadays, education is really important. It is said that education make good people better and correct bad ones.In my opinion, this statement makes sense, however, education does not always work like that.
On the one hand, education socialize people. At school we learn respectfully communicate with each other. We study rules of morality there as well.
Furthermore, education always involves a competition because we try to be better than our classmates. Plus, teachers train us to cope with different problems and as everyone knows what does not kill us
On the other hand, some people are convinced that education cannot make a human responsible or hard-working so it has nothing to do with developing person's character.
I disagree with that. Even though a lot of things depend only on a person (It's not wrong but for me it is a little weird. Maybe could use "individual factors"?), sometimes education can greatly help, for example, aids realize what a person is interested in (helping a person realize his interests. We cannot use three verb in one sentence). It is great when a person knows his place in life.
To sum up, I would like to say that even if
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this one is great english,, and u got point of view in that
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