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There is a place in London that perfectly could easily be like another country, with their own rules, lifestyle and their fresh local beers. I am not joking about this, this place is called Bermondsey and every Saturday all the beer lovers should peregrinate make a pilgrimage to this area to drink, probably, the freshly freshest London beers, a.k.a "The Beer Mile". One An area full of breweries with tap rooms, bars, bottle shops and more. Other cities like Manchester or and Barcelona are experimenting with the same model.

But, what has does this place have that I like so much? In February of this year, I popped down to London for a Beer festival in the afternoon, so I'm thinking to do (better: thinking of doing) tourism in London (again), but my brain says, why we don't go to visit one of my favorites breweries? So I decided to visit The Kernel Brewery but I forgot that they closed the tap room in November of 2015 :(. So I looked for the breweries closest and then, I started visiting Four Pure Brew. They run brewery tours and their tap room is great, fancy and with good stuff. I have to confess that I had tasted their beers before, but this brewery was freaking me out basically because it was one of the bigger breweries that I saw in Bermondsey. Nice tap room, with food trucks and the brewery looked good (or another adjective) also with a can line. I drank a couple of pints there and then I moved to the next one in on the route, Partizan Brewing. A small independent brewery with good sour lines but quite difficult to get their beers in the north of England. I specially remember the collaboration with Prairie Artisan for the 7th International Rainbow Project and this beer is just really special (or another adjective). Good brewery, small tap room and if it is busy you can feel a little bit uncomfortable. Beside this brewery you have the bar of Ebria, an online bottle shop that they ships (or from which they ship) fresh beers directly from the breweries to your home.

Great stuff César! My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

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*Had to look up this word, I don't think 95% of even native speakers would know it to be honest. I can understand why you've used it, but sometimes when it comes to these kind of complicated words, it pays to be careful, and to keep it simple where possible. A more commonly known word that could be used here, that still retains the intelligent tone you're going for, would be "convene".

**"Thinking maybe to do the tourist thing again"