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essay 1 Both texts are based on a common topic: cinema and movie. This essay aims summarise the key arguments, both positive and negative, and evaluate them with objective perspectives. Movie technology has been developing since the first appearance of cinema, which enables us to feel as if we are actually in the movie, escaping from tedious daily lives. The change from watching a story to experiencing a story made it possible for movie to even enlighten us a new perspective about various issues, let us contemplate on them, and let us act differently from how we used to. Many movie makers find it the most pleasurable moment when they know their movie actually affected the life of audience even a little bit, and that is why they try to make meaningful movies. Some claim, however, that cinema is being less cultural place as movie industry is focusing on contributing commercially rather than culturally, to the world, which is clear from the fact they are spending a great amount of their budget, which they are supposed to make fullest use of to make the movie itself a better one, on marketing for it, although it is true that profit is indeed an integral factor for the industry to keep proceeding and produce another great movie, and the surely movie has an aspect as an entertainment. Movie can be as persuasive as a medium can be, just like it can be as amusing as a medium can be. The cultural education movies can give us must be positively received by both the film industry and audience.

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essay 1

Both texts are based on a common topic: cinema and movie. This essay aims summarise the key arguments, both positive and negative, and evaluate them with objective perspectives.
Movie technology has been developing since the first appearance emergence of cinema, which enables us to feel as if we are actually in the movie, escaping from tedious daily lives. The change from watching a story to experiencing a story made it possible for movies to even enlighten us to a new perspective about various issues, to let us contemplate on them, and to let us act differently from how we used to. Many movie makers find it the most pleasurable moment when they know take pleasure in knowing that their movie actually affected the life of its audience even a little bit, and that is why they try to make meaningful movies.
Some claim, however, that cinema is being a less cultural place as the movie industry is focusing on contributing commercially rather than culturally, to the world, which is clear from the fact they are spending a great amount of their budget, which they are supposed to make fullest use of to make the movie itself a better one, on its marketing for it. Although it is true that profit is indeed an integral factor for the industry to keep proceeding and on producing another great movies, and the surely the movie has an aspect contribution as an to entertainment.
Movies can be as persuasive as any medium can be, just likeas it can be as amusing as any medium can be. The culturally educational movies can give us must be positively received by both the film industry and audience.
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essay 1

Both texts are based on a common topic: cinema and movie. This essay aims to summarise the positive and negative key arguments in addition to evaluating them with objective perspectives.
Film technology has been developing since the first appearance emergence of cinema, which enables us to feel as if we are actually in the movie, escaping from our tedious daily lives. The change from simply viewing a movie to actually feeling involved in it made it possible for movies to even enlighten us with a new perspective about various issues, allowing us contemplate on them, and causing us to respond or react in different ways from how we are used to. Many movie film makers find it pleasurable to know their movies affect the lives of their audience even if in the slightest, and that is why they are so fervent about creating compelling, profound movies.
Some claim, however, that cinema is being a less cultural place as movie the film industry is more focused on contributing commercially rather than culturally to the world.  The film industry proves this because instead of focusing on using their budget to improve the movie itself, they're more focused on marketing it. Although, it is true that financial profit is indeed an integral factor for the industry to continue proceeding progressing and producing many more great movies.

Movies can be as persuasive as a medium, just as it can be as amusing as any medium can be. Educational and cultural movies must be positively received by both the film industry and the audience.

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