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Friends and family 2 exist a huge difference between friends and family, that difference consist in that we can’t choose our family because they belong to our life since we were born, and we have degrees of consanguinity that never we have with other people. Although, we can created a similar relation with our friends, but we never can replace to our family for people that are today but tomorrow we don’t know. nevertheless, friends are the people in whom we can trust to tell our innermost secrets, secrets that we can never tell our family. To conclude both are important in our life, but family are irreplaceable because they never let you even though we have problems, or we are going through difficult times. Family never give up, and they try the times that are necessaries to do it good. So, family is the most important social group that we can belong and we have to be thankful and look after for them.

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Friends and Family 2

There is a huge difference between friends and family that exist. It is the fact that we cannot choose our family because we're born in it, and we have a degree of consanguinity which we will never have with others. Although, we can create a similar relationship with our friends, we won't be able to replace our families with people who are present today but won't be tomorrow.

 Nevertheless, friends are the people in whom we can trust to tell our innermost secrets to, secrets that we can never tell our family.

To conclude, both are important to our lives, but family is irreplaceable because they will never let you down during hard times. Family will never give up on you, and (they try the times that are necessaries to do it good) (It is unclear for me what this sentence mean). So, family is the most important social group that we  belong to and we have to be thankful and look after  them.

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