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Friends and family 1 Humans need to spend time with other people to belong in a society for this reason, they search people that are similar to them, they search people that are similar to them, and spend time in a society group. Sometimes we imitate the personality that people have in a society groups, and this can influence in each life. Have you ever thought about similarities that your family and your friends have? Or more simple, the different significant moments that we spend with them? They are important in our life for the time that they can spend with us because they become in special and essential people, for the form that they are when we stay with us. The purpose of this essay is pretend to say why family and friends are important in our life. So, there are two points to compare in this essay and one point to contrast such as time that they spend with us, and they can change our life. The point of contrast is we don't choose our family, but we can choose our friends. The moments that we spend with family and friends are essential because we learn more about habits, rules and values. In the case of family we spend with them since we were born and they help us to be a good person. Sometimes they can give us feedback about our mistakes, troubles or doubts. So, family spend with us our best moments. For example, in the house there are who help us to learn about life and tech as some things that are hard to learn about the world. They can change our life and guide us for the right way and we just to select if we want to continue that life or not. They teach us to don’t give up and be responsible. friends and family can be vital because they give us a good accompany, and make us feel important for their life. usually the time that we spend with our friends is outside of our house and this is a good point because we can go to other places that are comfortable for us. Sometimes friends are people that can help us to interact with the environment and improve our skills in a differents moments of our life. They can teach us different forms to live. So, they show us differents ways and we can choose the better option about our life.

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Humans need to spend time with other people to belong to a society. For this reason, they search for people that are similar to them and spend time in a society group. Sometimes we  adopt a role (mi sugerencia) that people have in a society groups, and this can influence everyone's life.  Have you ever thought about similarities that your family and your friends have? Or more simply, about the different significant moments that we spend with them? They are important to our lives becuase of the time they can spend with us. Also, they become in special and essential people for the way they are when they stay with us. The purpose of this essay is pretend to say why family and friends are important to our lives. So, there are two points to compare in this essay and one point to contrast, such as the time that they spend with us, and the way they can change our life. The point of contrast is we don't choose our family, but we can choose our friends.

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Friends and family 1

Humans need to spend time with other people to belong in a society. For this reason, they search for people that are similar to them, and spend time in social a society groups. Sometimes we imitate the personality of the that people have in a social society groups, and this can influence our lives in each life. Have you ever thought about the similarities between that your family and your friends have? Or more simply, the different significant moments that we spend with them? They are important in our life because of for the time that they can spend with us. because They become in special and essential people, for the way form that they are when we are together stay with us. The purpose of this essay is to try pretend to say why family and friends are important in our life. So, there are two points to compare in this essay and one point to contrast such as time that they spend with us, and they can change our life. The point of contrast is we don't choose our family, but we can choose our friends.

The moments that we spend with family and friends are essential because we learn more about habits, rules and values. In the case of family we have spent time spend with them since we were born and they help us to be a good person. Sometimes they can give us feedback about our mistakes, troubles or doubts. So, family spends time with us during our best moments. For example, in the house there are those who help us to learn about life and teach us some things that are hard to learn about the world. They can change our life and guide us towards for the right way and we just have to select if we want to continue that life or not. They teach us to not don’t give up and be responsible.

Friends and family can be vital because they give us a good accompany, and make us feel important for their life. usually the time that we spend with our friends is outside of our house and this is a good point because we can go to other places that are comfortable for us. Sometimes friends are people that can help us to interact with the environment and improve our skills in a differents moments of our life. They can teach us different ways forms to live. So, they show us differents ways and we can choose the better option for about our life.

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