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about me Most of my friends think that I'm friendly than I look. One of my goals this year is to improve my English. I live in a city where is not noisy and comfortable to live.

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About me

Most of my friends think that I'm friendlier than I look.

One of my goals this year is to improve my English.

I live in a city where it is not noisy but comfortable to live.


Hello Momo,

The comparative form of 2 syllable words ending in '-y' is to change the ending to '-ier' 

friendly > friendlier

I would use but in the last sentence as the connector is being used to contrast 2 different things.


Best wishes


Bob

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about me

Most of my friends think that I'm more friendly friendlier than what I look.

One of my goals this year is to improve my English.

I live in a city where that is not noisy and is comfortable to live. (Always separate enumerations of good things from bad things)

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About me

Most of my friends think that I'm friendlier than I look.

One of my goals this year, is to improve my English.

I live in a city, where it is not noisy but and comfortable to live.

 

Great write up, hardly any errors =)

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about me (About Me)

Most of my friends think that I'm friendlyier than I look. (Most of my friends think that I'm friendlier than I look.)

One of my goals this year is to improve my English.

I live in a city where it is not noisy quiet and living is comfortable to live. (I live in a city where it is quiet and living is comfortable)

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