My daily memory 5
Today, I watched a warm movie about 《Big Hero 6》.
In the origin of story ,Hero 's brother was dead, and that imaging made me sadness. I hated the occasion of separation,because I was sensitive to emotion about my family and friends.
When I continued to watch movie, I kown the professor was a bad guy, meanwhile, I was very anger about his behaviors.
When Hero found his brother 's dead was own to professor, he wanted to kill him, and I aslo expect to kill bad professor without my talk . Because the professor had been a teacher and Hero 's brother had wanted to survive with his life. Finally,but Hero did not hurt him. Standing by conscious, Hero 's final behavior was great !
Please give me some advices, I have written four notebooks, but two notebooks was not corrected and nothing about comments. I'm so depressed ,and I lost my passion as soon.
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My daily memory 5
Today, I watched a warm movie about 《Big Hero 6》.In the origin of story ,Hero 's brother was dead, and that imaging made me sadness. I hated the occasion of separation, because I was sensitive to emotion about my family and friends.
When I continued to watch movie, I kown the professor was a bad guy, meanwhile, I was very anger about his behaviors.
When Hero found his brother 's dead was own to professor, he wanted to kill him, and I aslo expect to kill bad professor without my talk . Because the professor had been a teacher and Hero 's brother had wanted to survive with his life. Finally, but Hero did not hurt him. Standing by conscious, Hero 's final behavior was great !
Please give me some advices, I have written four notebooks, but two notebooks was not corrected and nothing about comments. I'm so depressed ,and I lost my passion as soon.
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Today, I watched a Nice movie about 《Big Hero 6》.
In the origin of the story, Hero 's brother was dead, and that made me sad. I hated that they had to separate, because I am sensitive.
When I continued to watch movie, I knew the professor was a bad guy, meanwhile, I was very angry about his behaviors.
When Hero found out that the professor was the one who had killed his brother, he wanted to kill him, and I also expect to kill bad professor without my talk . Because the professor had been a teacher and Hero 's brother had wanted to survive with his life. (<-- I am not sure what this sentence means. ) In the end Hero did not hurt him. Standing by conscious( This phrase " Standing by conscious" sounds unnatural.) Hero 's final behavior was great !
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You are doing good! Keep studying and practicing. It looks like you have come a long way, and have practiced a lot! I could understand a lot of what you wrote!
God bless you!
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