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Raymond Carver I like Carver stories. The characters in those seem the same, emotionally paralyzed, and make me feel sad, and they also remind me of someone that I had a crush on, haha!

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Raymond Carver

I like Carver's stories.

The characters in them seem the same, emotionally paralyzed,
and make me feel sad.
They also remind me of someone that I had a crush on, haha!
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Raymond Carver

I like Carver's stories.

The characters in those (1) seem the same, emotionally paralyzed,
and make me feel sad.
and They also remind me of someone that I had a crush on, haha!

(1) 'those' is a little awkward here.  I'd suggesting something like "The characters in them.." "The characters in his stories.."  "The characters in the stories.."

Your English is really good these days, I think. ^^  You can write pretty well~

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