Would you please correct this essay? Thank you in advance The lifestyle of majority of people, particularly youths, in my country, Iran, is changing during recent years. In current years, the number of young people is growing rapidly in Iran. On the other side, the advancement in the technology followed by the emergence of modern communicative devices and method such as mobile phones, satellites, the Internet, social networks has displayed the lifestyle of other people, especially those who live in western countries. Two things mentioned above has had fundamental impacts on Iranian lifestyle. In the past, old traditions extremely dominated Iranian society. Marriages were formed based on the method which had been kept for long years. The father's remarks in the family were considered as orders which couldn't be disobeyed. While women usually stayed at home and did house work, men spent the majority of times outside of the house to provide enough income for the family. Meanwhile there were good stuffs too. For example, emotional relationships among the family members were much more powerful than nowadays. Respect to each other, particularly elder people, was much more customary and, overally the people treated to each other much more friendly than nowadays.