Useful inventions
We are living in a fast world and we are searching the way to make everything faster. We have invented fast food, fast communications, fast relationships, etc. So we needed to invent one gadget which help us to follow this fast rhythm.
I think that this invention was the smartphone, the all in one gadget. Nowadays is difficult to find any person who does not have a mobile phone. We are always in contact with other people, it is the modern way of life, and we have acquired one new need, our smartphone. You can manage your company, be in contact with your family, have fun and even turn on your home heating if you are outside.
I can not imagine anything more useful than a smartphone, and due to our stressful way of life, we depend on it and we feel safe when it is in the pocket. Maybe we are forgetting personal contact, maybe our health is suffering with our routine...but if it became a serious problem, we can use our smartphone to ask for help.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 5
1
Useful inventions
We are living in a fast world in which we are searching for a way to make everything faster. We have invented fast food, fast communications, fast relationships, etc. So we needed to invent one more gadget that would allow this fast rhythm to continue.I think that this invention was the smartphone, the all in one gadget. Nowadays it is difficult to find someone who does not have a mobile phone. We are always in contact with other people - it is the modern way of life. We have acquired a new need, our smartphone. With a smartphones it's possible to manage a company, be in contact with family, have fun and even turn on the central heating if you are outside.
I can not imagine anything more useful than a smartphone. Due to our stressful way of life, we depend on it and we feel safe when it is in the pocket. Maybe we are forgetting how to communicate face to face, maybe our health is suffering with our routine...but if it becomes a serious problem, we can use our smartphone to ask for help.
Good writing I understood all of it, I just changed bits of it to make it sound more English :)
1
Useful inventions
We are living in a fast world and we are searching for the ways to make everything faster. We have invented fast food, fast communications, fast relationships, etc. So we needed to invent one gadget which helps us to follow this fast rhythm.I think that this invention was the smartphone, the all in one gadget. Nowadays it is difficult to find any person who does not have a mobile phone. We are always in contact with other people, it is the modern way of life, and we have acquired one new need, our smartphone. You can manage your company, be in contact with your family, have fun and even turn on your home heating if you are outside.
I can not imagine anything more useful than a smartphone, and due to our stressful way of life, we depend on it and we feel safe when it is in our the pocket. Maybe we are neglecting forgetting personal contact, maybe our health is suffering from with our routine...but if it became a serious problem, we can use our smartphone to ask for help.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
