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Who Am I? If you was born in the decade of 90s you will recognize this title. This movie inspire me to put this title to my text and a homework, of course. I am going to write about my life in a few sentences. Mi name is Diego. I am 25 years-old. I am single. I live in Colombia which is the only country in south America with two oceans. I work in a higher education institution, something like a college. There I am a support Engineer. I manage the network computers and help to manage a platform in moodle. My dayly routine is very common. Although I change the order of some activities. For example: some days, first I am going to a GYM in the morning more or less 6:00 A.M. When I finish then I go to my work. The place where I work is close to the GYM. I always take my lunch since my home.My mother or father prepare it. At 12:00 I have my lunch. Then I study english for 15 or 20 minutes. When I return to my home in the evening I take a vehicle called moto carro. Please see the second image in the link. (I know it. it is not necessary specify it!) At my home I have my dinner at 6:30 P.M or 7:00 P.M oclock. When I change the order to go to the Gym, I wake up at 6:00 A.M. I have my breakfast and I take a "motocarro" until my work. I pay around 1.3 american dollars doing the conversion because the official money in Colombia is the Peso. Well, that's all friends. I could continue but It would be too for you help me to correct the text. Thanks if you still are Reading. link for see motocarro:

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Who Am I?

If you were born in the decade of 90s you will recognize this title. This movie inspired me to do this text and a homework, of course.
I am going to write about my life in a few sentences.
My name is Diego. I am 25 years old. I am single. I live in Colombia, which is the only country in South America bordering two oceans. I work in a higher education institution, something like a college. There I am a support engineer. I manage the network computers and help to manage a platform in moodle. My daily routine is very simple, although I change the order of some activities. For example: some days, first I am going to a gym in the morning at about 6:00 A.M. When I finish, I go to my work. The place where I work is close to the gym. I always eat my lunch at my home. My mother or father prepares it. At 12:00 I have my lunch. Then I study English for 15 or 20 minutes.
When I return to my home in the evening I take a vehicle called moto carro. Please see the second image. (I know it. it is not necessary specify it!)
At my home I have my dinner at 6:30 P.M or 7:00 P.M oclock [You either say "7 o'clock" or "7 PM" but not both]. When I change the order to go to the gym, I wake up at 6:00 A.M. I have my breakfast and I take a "motocarro" to my work. I pay around 1.3 american dollars doing the conversion because the official money in Colombia is the Peso.
Well, that's all friends. I could continue but it would be helpful if you corrected the text. Thanks if you are still reading.

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