My neighborhood. Could you correct it, please?
Firstly, I would like to talk about my neighborhood. I live in a neighborhood called Juan, I like it because it is very quiet and clean. There are lots of houses and buildings such as libraries, parks, banks, supermarkets and boutiques. The most important is that there is a astonishing Church which gives the name of the area. In addition, in this church there is a saint very appreciated in my town, it is called Saint Juan.
Two pavements from my house, there is a school where all the children here go. This isn´t very large but it is equipped with the latest technology and is bilingual school as well. The inhabitants of this area are very decent people, respectful and cheerful but they usually live on their own side. Although it is very important to clarify that they have always been kind to me.
On the other hand, I would like to describe you something about my house. I live in a block of flat on second floor. This was built in 2002 and it has a lift. My flat is very spacious. It has two bedrooms, a tiny kitchen, two big bathrooms, a study and a huge dining-room with balcony. Moreover, the windows and the doors are made of wood and has air condition and central heating. I would like to say that the room what I most love is my study because it is an absolutely bright room and cosy. There is a huge wood desk,which was built by my grandfather and next to it, there are two shelves with wood puzzle and books.
To conclude, you are to invite when you feel like going to my house .
Thank you for you help me.
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My neighborhood. Could you correct it, please?
Firstly, I would like to talk about my neighborhood. I live in a neighborhood called Juan. I like it because it is very quiet and clean. There are lots of houses and buildings such as libraries, parks, banks, supermarkets and boutiques. Most importantly, there is an astonishing Church which gives the name to the area. In addition, in this church there is a saint, very appreciated in my town, called Saint Juan.Two blocks from my house, there is a school where all the children here go. This isn´t very large but it is equipped with the latest technology and is a bilingual school as well. The inhabitants of this area are very decent people, respectful and cheerful but they usually keep to themselves. (Although it is very important to clarify that they have always been kind to me.)
On the other hand, I would like to describe you something about my house. I live in a flat on second floor. This was built in 2002 and it has a lift. My flat is very spacious. It has two bedrooms, a tiny kitchen, two big bathrooms, a study and a huge dining-room with a balcony. Moreover, the windows and the doors are made of wood and has air conditioning and central heating. I would like to say that the room that I most love is my study because it is absolutely bright and cosy. There is a huge wood desk,which was built by my grandfather and next to it, there are two shelves with wood puzzles and books.
To conclude, you are invited when you feel like coming to my house .
Thank you for helping me.
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