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diary I have decided that I will keep diary in Eglish since last week.And today is the first day.I am very happy that I am really doing this thing.l think l lack English words very much,because I don't konw what to say now.Mabe I can talk about that why l keep an English diary.The first reason is that I am going to take part in University English Test by three ,I must make preparations for it.And the second reason is that I have had the plan that I will go abroad for a long time,so I should improve my English level.Well,I have nothing to say,goodbey.

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My diary

Last week I have decided that I will keep diary in English, since last week.and today is the first day. I am very happy that I am really doing this thing. l think l lack English words very much,because I don't konw  know what to say now. Maybe I can talk about that why l keep an English diary. The first reason is that I am going to take part in a University English Test in three months/weeks/years time, and by three ,I must make prepare for it. And The second reason is that I have had the plan to that I will go abroad for a long time, so I should improve my English level. Well, I have nothing to say, goodbye.

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diary

Last week I decided to keep a diary in English, and today is the first day! I am very happy that I am really doing it. l'm aware that l lack English vocabulary because I don't know what to say now. Maybe I can talk about why l want to keep an English diary.The first reason is that I am going to take the University English Test (in three .../ at 3:00 pm) ?, and I have to prepare for it. The second reason is that for a long time I have been planning to go abroad, so I should improve my English/English level. Well, I have nothing more to say. Goodbye!

Nice plan!

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Diary

I have decided that I will keep a diary in English since last week. And today is the first day. I am very happy that I am really doing this thing. l think l lack English words very much, because I don't know what to say now. Maybe I can talk about that why l keep an English diary. The first reason is that I am going to take part in University English Test (by three ?). I must make preparations for it. And the second reason is that I have had the plan that I will go abroad for a long time, so I should improve my English level. Well, I have nothing to say, goodbye.

Very well written!

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1. Normally we omit the "that" in "Maybe I can talk about that why l keep an English diary." Example: We can talk about it. 2. For that .....by three..... If you meant you are going to take part in the test 3 days after now, then you should have said: .....in three days (三天后) If you meant any possible days of that three days, then it will be: .....within three days (三天内) Example: Today is Wednesday, it will be Saturday in three days! Hope these might help you :)

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