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Why it is unwise to put all your eggs in one basket?
If you stand on Wall Street and ask some random people about investment, they will always say 'don't put all your eggs in one basket'. It's true, no one will takes such a huge risk who is wise enough.
Here are some reasons provide why you shouldn't do such a drastic thing. First, once you put all your eggs in one basket, the risk to your interests will raise . Secondly, it will burden you heavily and in the end, this will break you down. Thirdly, in real life, to put all your eggs in one basket exposes you to such enormous risks, and it will torture you till you mentally collapse.
In a summary, this proverb's existence for reason?. Else why would Jianlin Wang put his money only in real estate?

I am not sure if I understood most of this but I am a null in economics. ;)

HELP ME WITH MY COMPOSITION PLEASE

Why it is unwise to put all your eggs in one basket
When you stand in wall-street and ask some people about investments randomly on the Wall Street, they always say, don't put all your eggs in one basket. It's true, no one will takes such a huge risk who is if wise enough.
Here are some reasons provided of why you shouldn't do such rough a thing. First, once you put all your eggs in one basket, the risk of your interests investments will raise/increase . Secondly, doing things like this, it will lets you take too many heavy burdens and in the end, it will breaks you down. Thirdly, in real life, putting all your eggs in one basket will lets you take expose you to such an enormous risk, and it will tortures you till you collapse in a mental illness to some  degree/which will cause some degree of mental illness/distress.
In a summary, this proverb's existence for a reason. Else why not Jianlin Wang puts his money only in real estate?/Otherwise why Jianlin Wang doesn't invest all his money in real estate?