Dragon Boat Festival
The annual Dragon Boat Festival is coming soon. The fifth day of the fifth lunar month is Duanwu Festival, also called Dragon Boat Festival. It's one of the Chinese national traditional festivals. Eating rice dumplings and dragon-boat racing are two important customs to commemorating one of the Chinese famous persons named Qu Yuan.
I can't go back to my hometown with my family this year.This early morning I received a package of rice dumplings my monther sent to me from my hometown. They have different tastes.
No matter where I am my mom sends me rice dumplings if I wasn't at home every year. My heart filled with gratitude. My mon always makes my favorite rice dumplings that with red beans. And I like to eat dumplings made by my mon very much. They filled with the taste of home. I ate two as soon as I received. It really tastes good.
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Dragon Boat Festival
The annual Dragon Boat Festival is coming soon. The fifth day of the fifth lunar month is Duanwu Festival, also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It's one of the Chinese national traditional festivals. Eating rice dumplings and dragon-boat racing are two important customs that help to commemorate Qu Yuan, one of China's most famous people.I can't go back to my hometown to be with my family this year. Early this morning, I received a package of rice dumplings my monther sent to me from my hometown. They are all different flavors.
No matter where I am, my mom always sends me rice dumplings if I am not home during a holiday. My heart is filled with gratitude. My mom always makes my favorite rice dumplings with red beans. I like to eat dumplings made by my mom very much. They are filled with the taste of home. I ate two as soon as I received the package. They really tastes good.
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Dragon Boat Festival
The annual Dragon Boat Festival is coming soon. The fifth day of the fifth lunar month is the Duanwu Festival, also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It's one of the Chinese national traditional traditional national festivals. Eating rice dumplings and dragon-boat racing are two important customs, to commemorating one of the Chinese famous persons China's famous people, named Qu Yuan.I can't go back to my hometown with my family this year. This early morning I received a package of rice dumplings my monther sent to me from my hometown. They have different tastes They all taste different.
No matter where I am, my mom sends me rice dumplings if I wasn't at home every each year. My heart filled with gratitude. My mom always makes my favorite rice dumplings that with red beans. And I like to eat dumplings made by my mom very much. They're filled with the taste of home. I ate two as soon as I received the package. It really tastes good. They taste really good.
Really interesting entry! I learned about the Dragon boat Festival in my Chinese class three and a half years ago.
On the subject of "customs to commemorating", I'm not actually sure if the "to" (or any preposition) needs to be there. I would normally put a comma (,) there and skip the preposition, but I think it would be OK to say "customs when commemorating".
Otherwise, very good work. The description of the dumplings makes my mouth water :D
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