Automation
you are fired ,why ? after they made robots we don’t think you have opportunity to work . you should do what robots say ! . people will stay in their home and laziness huge them , the process of give and take won’t happen because machine work with machine . soon the robots will control the world . we made robots to have orderly life but everything change to worse . after days the robots don’t want live with humans so they start to murder them . jay was dreaming , but who’s know! maybe dream become true .
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Automation
you are fired ,why ?Either:
You are fired! Why?
Why are you fired?
After they made robots we don’t think you have opportunity to work .
Since the robots have been created you no longer have the opportunity to work.
you should do what the robots say ! . people will should stay in their home and allow laziness to hug(?)/to surround(?) huge them ,
What do you mean here by "laziness huge them"?
the process of A give and take won’t happen because machines work with machines. Soon the robots will control the world. We made robots to have an orderly life but everything changed to for the worse . After several days the robots decide they don’t want to live with humans so they start to murder them. Jay was dreaming , but who’s who knows! Maybe his dream become will come true .
Nice story! When you end a sentence with a period, never put a space before it, always after it. Always be sure to start your sentences with capital letters. And when you put an exclamation point(!) you don't need to put a period after it.
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Thanks Baxter for read =) okay I'll watch it ;-)
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There's a movie called 'The Terminator' and it's all about your dream. Robots take over and murder all the humans so the people send someone from the future back in time to try to stop the machines but the machines do the same thing so who will win? You'll have to watch to find out!
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