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weekend at the beach I went to the beach with my friends. We went in August last year.This was fun. In the morning we went to the beach and we ate there. After we came back to home and we had a shower because it was hot. In the night we went to dinner on the street, we ate typic food spanish :the fish.the weather in the night was fantastic y after we went cubbing until late

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weekend at the beach

In August of last year, I went to the beach with my friends. We had fun.
In the morning we went to the beach and we ate there.  (Maybe specify what meal you ate - "we ate lunch at the beach").
After we came back to home and we each took had a shower because it was hot  (or you could say "because we were hot"). In the That night we went to dinner on the street at an outdoor cafe, where we ate typical spanish food :the fish.  (perhaps you could be more descriptive of the type of fish...salmon, trout, tilapia, etc).  the weather in the that night was fantastic y and afterwards, we went clubbing until late into the night.

 

 

Let me rewrite my suggestion for that last sentence:  "The weather that night was fantastic.  After dinner, we went clubbing until late into the night." 

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