Thinking about life
During this two months I was a really bit depressed about what I want and how can I make my dreams happens. But today I just realized that I'm in a correct way, just I have to keep going to make this will happen and don't worry about time. Because, the opportunity will came and I have to be preparer for that, so I'm going to keep in this way and I will keep enjoying the life too.
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Thinking about life
During these past two months, I have been a bit depressed about what I want and how can I make my dreams happen. But today, I just realized that I'm on the right path, I just I have to keep going to make this happen and don't worry about time. The opportunity will come and I have to be prepared for that, so I'm going to keep on going this way and I will keep enjoying life too.Really nice writing, Fernanda! Don't forget you shouldn't start your sentence with "because," and "life" doesn't take the article "the" unless we're using an idiom like, "This is the life!" Keep writing :)
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Thinking about life
During these (past) two months, I was really bit depressed about what I want and how I can realise make my dreams happens. But today, I just realized that I'm in the correct path way, just that, I have to keep going to make this will happen and don't worry about time because, the opportunity will come and I have to be prepared for that. So, I'm going to keep in going in this path and I will keep enjoying the life, too.
Greatt write up and yes, be strong and fulfil your dreams! =)
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That's the way!! Always keep a positive mind :)
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