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I always worried about my daughter My daughter likes carrot pastry and Noodles with Soy Bean Paste very much. Everytime she eats a carrot pastry, she drinks a bowl of sweet green beans soup too. I believe that they are enough for her. She is full. But this morning after eating these she ate a grown sugar steamed bun and a tea egg too. I'm worried whether she was too full or not. We always go out to eat Noodles with Soy Bean Paste. This is one of my favorite food too. Before, we always ordered a large portion and we two shared it. That’s enough for us. We were not too full and not hungry neither. Yesterday, she insisted that she wanted another portion. So we ordered two medium portions. She ate up it. She is only 3 years old, I can’t believe she can eat as much as I eat.

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I always worry about my daughter

My daughter likes carrot pastry, noodles with soy bean paste very much. Everytime she eats a carrot pastry, she drinks a bowl of sweet green bean soup too. I believe that they are enough for her. She is full. However, this morning, after eating these, she ate a grown sugar steamed bun and a tea egg too. I'm worried whether she was too full or not.
We always go out to eat noodles with soy bean paste. This is one of my favorite foods too. Before, we always ordered a large portion and the two of us shared it. That’s enough for us. We were not too full and not hungry either. Yesterday, she insisted that she wanted another portion, so we ordered two medium portions. She ate up it.
She is only 3 years old. I can’t believe she can eat as much as I eat.
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I am always worried about my daughter

My daughter likes carrot pastries and noodles with soy bean paste very much. Every time she eats a carrot pastry, she drinks a bowl of sweet green beans soup too. I believe that they are enough make her full.  for her. She is full.

* -- 更自然的句子,不管你的句子是对的。

But this morning after eating these she ate a grown sugar steamed bun and a tea egg too. I'm worried whether she was too full or not. 

We always go out to eat Noodles with Soy Bean Paste. This is one of my favorite foods  as well too. Before, we always ordered a large portion and we two shared it. That’s enough for us. We were not too full and not hungry neither. Yesterday, she insisted that she wanted another portion. So we ordered two medium portions. She ate it all up! up it.
She is only 3 years old, I can’t believe she can eat as much as I eat.

非常好,你写得又很好又很自然。错误很少,加油!

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Cute story!

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