Computers
We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in businesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers good or should we be more suspicious of their benefits? Use specific details and examples in your answer (at least 100 words).
It is very difficult to imagine our lives without both computer and internet connection today, and one can hardly overestimate the role of it in nowadays society. There are a lot of advantages and disadvantages of using computers.
One the one hand, computers are our friends, because they are helpful at work, at our day-to-day activities, and we can even make use of them at our time off. Isn’t it great? Computers give us the opportunity to reduce time spent on making long and dull calculations at work. Moreover, they help scientists and workers to improve their research and work performance what is really great for humankind, isn’t it? Furthermore, we can easily find any answer for every “why”, ”where”, and “who” we have. It’s really fantastic, and I have no clue what I would do if I had no computer. Fortunately, both computer engineering and IT are developing rapidly. Computers can control different processes already and they start controlling us, don’t they? I hope it will have a great impact on our future and help us to make our lives much easier than they were even few years ago.
On the other hand, people tend to be addicted to using computers, especially some social networks like Facebook, Twitter. Children do not want studying because they know that there are all answers for all their questions. There is a lot of forbidden or unacceptable information on the internet we’d better never come across. But we can do nothing about pop-ups or advertisement on our favorite sites, and so we just try not to notice this fact.
To sum up, every coin has two sides. We can’t get rid of computers now, because they are an essential part of our daily lives. But at least let’s try to reduce its using, shall we?
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Computers
We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in businesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What will they be used for in the future?* Is this dependencancy good or should we be more suspicious of their benefits? Use specific details and examples in your answer (at least 100 words).It is hard to imagine our lives without both computer and internet today, and one can hardly overestimate their roles today. There are many advantages and disadvantages of using computers.
One the one hand, computers are our friends, because they are helpful at work, in our day-to-day activities, and we can even make use of them in our time off. Isn’t it great? Computers reduce time spent on making long and dull calculations at work and help scientists and others to improve research and efficiency which is really great for mankind, isn’t it? Furthermore, we can more easily find any answer for every “why”, ”where”, and “who” we have. It’s really fantastic, and I have no clue what I would do if I had no computer. Fortunately, both computer engineering and IT are developing rapidly. Computers can control different processes already and they start controlling us, don’t they? I hope this will have a great impact on our future and help us to make our lives much easier than they were even few years ago.
On the other hand, people tend to be addicted to computers, especially some social networks like Facebook and Twitter. Children do not want to study because they know that there are all answers for all their questions (on the computer or on the web?). There is a lot of forbidden or unacceptable information on the internet we had better never come across. But we can do nothing about pop-ups or advertisements on our favorite sites, and so we just try to ignore them.
To sum up, every coin has two sides. We can’t get rid of computers now, because they are an essential part of life but at least let us try to reduce their use, shall we?
*or, what will they be used for next?
Very well written! I'm just getting back to my computer...
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