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About Play it Forward: please correct it
Introduction
Play it Forward is a romantic and drama movie, the story which takes place in the USA. This film speak is about how to change the world. It This consists inof helping each other and for caning being able to realize a change in the people´s thinking, .for that It is necessary to works all together and It is so build a world in order to create a better, healthier, more united, world, when where everyone can live in harmony, in and peace, without have having problems with nobady anybody. It is very necessary crate a world fairer tocreate a better world.
This film is developing in a very real environment very real, scenario, because our world has those these problems. Play it forward movie was developing was centered with on a view of better improving or trying to change form see the world. It try to see the world of a form overview, help mutually, that it yes can change. (I am not quite sure what you mean in this last sentence.)
Some palces that arecall in the film are, Los Angeles, San Francisco and Finix Phoenix.
Starring, Eugene Simonet,teacher. Arlene McKinney, mother. Trevor McKinney, son. Chris Chandler, reporter. Jerry, junkie. Ricki, father. Grace, Sidney, Thorsen, Kevin Spacey, Helen Hunt, Haley Joel Osment, Jay Mohr, James Caviezel, Jon Bon Jovi, Angie Dickinson, David Ramsey, Gary Wemtz .
My opinion about this film is that it is awesome, because it film is focuses in on some values that are very important in each person. and olso It also try or it do to see how is our world. gives us an image to compare our world to. Mostly importantly, it gives us a great message, : everybody can help each other can change the world, but we must start for oneself by ourselves and do the difference, . Also Finally, it try about shows that when it is very difficult to change or leave something we are accustomed to, especially in a society where many people have bad habits or customs.
Recommendation this film: This movie has something of real, and if we see our world we realize that it is very bad, and that we are destroying and harming our planet. If this continues, in the future we will have many problems, therefore it is necessary to do something to stop ourselves. This film may have a utopian setting, but it still sends us the message that everybody must be aware of our situation, and that we must adopt a new mentality and view of the world.
Sometimes for be different or have having different thinking is dangerous, because it can cause the death, which is demonstrated by the end of the film how is watched the end of the film.
About the film "Pay It Forward"
Introduction
"Pay It Forward" is a romantic drama. The story take place in the USA. This film treats the subject of changing the world. The solution it presents involves helping each other, in order to realise a change in people's thinking. To achieve that goal, it is necessary for everyone to work together to make a better world, where everyone is healthier, more united, and can live in harmony, in peace, without having any problems with others. It is very necessary crate a world fairer. [What is necessary to create a fairer world? It's unclear from this sentence. Or do you mean that creating a fairer world is necessary?]
The plot develops in a very real environment, which has the problems that our world has. "Pay It Forward" was developed with the idea of trying to change the world, and change the way people view it. It attempts to create a vision of people helping one another, to demonstrate how it can change.
Some places that appear in the film are: Los Angeles, San Francisco and Phoenix. [Are you talking about Phoenix, Arizona?]
The movies stars, Eugene Simonet, as a teacher. Arlene McKinney, as a mother. Trevor McKinney, as a son. Chris Chandler, as a reporter. Jerry, as a junkie. Ricki, as a father. Grace, as Sidney, Thorsen, Kevin Spacey, Helen Hunt, Haley Joel Osment, Jay Mohr, James Caviezel, Jon Bon Jovi, Angie Dickinson, David Ramsey, Gary Wemtz.
My opinion about this film that it is awesome, because it film is focuses in some values that are very important to everybody, and it also tries or it do to see how is our world. Mostly it gives us a great message - that everybody help each other to be able to change the world, but we must start with ourselves to make a difference, Also it shows how when we are accustomed to something, it is very difficult to change or leave that behind, especially when living in a society where the most people have bad habits or customs.
Recommendation
This film shows us something about the real world, and if we look at our world we realize that it is very bad and the worst part is that we ourselves are destroying and harming our planet and if it continues into the future, we will have many problems. Because of that, it is necessary to do something for our world, for ourselves. It is difficult to realize the ideas that are addressed in this film, and so it appears somewhat utopian, but now is the time for everybody to take note and try to change our mentality of how we see the world.
Sometimes for being different or thinking differently is dangerous, because it can cause the death, as occurs in the end of this film.
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Hi Vicente. I've marked spelling, punctuation and grammar corrections in yellow, phrasing corrections in blue, vocabulary corrections in magenta. When I couldn't understand the meaning of a phrase, I marked it in cyan.
In a formal context, don't use a comma to separate sentences. e.g. "Play it forward is a romantic and drama movie, the story take place in USA." - these are separate sentences. Use a fullstop, or use a conjunction such as "and" to link them together.
The list of names of actors is confusing, because for some of the actors you've only listed their first names, and it's not entirely clear if it's the name of the actor or of the character. If you say a film "stars" someone, that means that actor is a celebrity. So in this case, the film stars Kevin Spacey, Helen Hunt, Haley Joel Osment and Jon Bon Jovi. Most of the other actors aren't really stars.
I hope that helps. Good luck.
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