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There is a shock news I just know about it after that event had happened for 2 days There is a shock news I just know about it after that event had happened for 2 days Oh! I am so dull! I just know the professional boxer Ali was died in a disease, but not know there was also a famous athlete, a motor sport rider, Luis Salom and he was died so young! I never thought that would happen to anyone in the racing game nowadays! That’s pretty shock for me, even it is true I still can’t not believe that just happened so quickly, of course it was a racing competition that is usually happened to suddenly with any accident. I know Ali is a legend now, and his reputation, his name is pretty shinny even a generation like me also know his name and his very famous and effective quote, “float like a butterfly, sting like a bee”. These words are so fantastic when he became a real legend. I was just shocked by the news that I received latterly about the nice racer Luis Salom, there are two star fallen down in two days, one was still growing and the other one has been a legend already. Sorry about some words, if I have any unrespect words, I only want to express myself about these two bad news in the world, on the whole sport footages, and also to have a record in my own daily note, journal, diary. R.I.P You are always in my heart! (and also In people’s history)

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There is a shock news I just knew about it after that event had happened for in 2 days 

There is a shock news I just knew about it after that event had happened for in 2 days

Oh! I am so dull! I just know the professional boxer Ali was died by a disease, but not don't know there was also a famous athlete, a motor sport rider, Luis Salom and he was has died so young at young age! I never thought that would happen to anyone in the racing game nowadays! That’s pretty shocking for me, even it is true I still can’t not believe that just happened so quickly, of course it was a racing competition that is usually  happensed to suddenly with in any accident.

I know Ali is a legend now, and his reputation, his name is pretty shinny that even a generation like me mine also know his name and his very famous and effective quote, “float like a butterfly, sting like a bee”. These words are so fantastic that when he became a real legend.

I was just shocked by the news that I received latterly about the nice racer Luis Salom, there are two stars fallen down in two days, one was still growing and the other one has been a legend already.

Sorry about some words, if I have any unrespect misspelled words, I only want to express myself about these two bad news in to the world, on the whole sport footages, and also to have a record in my own daily note, journal, diary.

R.I.P
You are always in my heart! (and also In people’s history)

-Hope that was helpful-

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