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Some students would prefer to becom a postgraduate student after university and put off searching for a job for a while. By doing this. they can make themselves more marketable by gaining more qualifications.
For others. it is more important to become an employee than to contiue their professienal edwcational trainlng.These graduaftes might find that becoming an independent person is move importabt. In addition ,evenfor those gradwates who think that a postgraduate degree is in their future , some believe that it is important to gain some work experience in the field before pursuing further education.
In my opinion, gaining some work experience after graduation would be better for me .Not only can i gain some independence. but i can also try out the field first before investing in a postgraduate degree.
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Some students would prefer to becom become a postgraduate student after university and which will help them for put off searching for a job for a while. By doing this, they can make themselves more marketable by gaining more certain qualifications.For others. it is more important to become an employee than to continue contiue their professional professienal edwcational educational training.These graduaftes graduates might find themselves that becoming an independent person is move more important. In addition ,even for those graduates gradwates who thinks that a postgraduate degree is in their future , some people believes it is more important to gain few work experiences in the right field before pursuing their further education.or carrier
In my opinion, gaining some work experience after graduation would be better for me .Not only in gaining independence can i gain some independence. but i can also try trying out in different fields first before investing a lot of money in a postgraduate degree.
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hey it is better to write in microsoft word and it is very hard to look at the alphabets
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Yeah Devan,you are right :)
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I second Amar: if you type out what you wrote in a notebook entry, it would be a lot easier for people to correct :)
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