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Although i'm major in English, my writing skills are poor. I hope you guys will me with this. Environment pollution is one of the most serious global issues which dangers our lives because of human activities. According to recent figures, more 2 million people die each day for air pollution. We have to change our attitude and actions before it is too late. We need to useful solutions and plans to do them. with air pollution, walking, riding or using public transportation will reduce carbon emission. If we do this, there will be fewer cars and less fumes. Turn off fans, lights, air conditioners when we do not use them beacause fossil fuels are also burn to produce electricity. Plan more trees for absorbing and releasing oxygen. They play a significant part on improving our air quality. Industrial companies need to install system that reduce exhaust emission as well as clean polluted water. Goverment should invest in clean energy such as solar and wind energy. Water and land contamination are issues we have to care about. We have to throw rubbish in the correct places, limit using pesticides farming.Goverment need to apply more strict rules to prevent littering. We also should try to get into the habit of buying second-hand clothes or used items. Finally, each person should research more information about the environment pollution and the importance of stopping pollution. Please save our Earth!

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Although i'm major in English, my writing skills are poor. I hope you guys will me with this.

Environment pollution is one of the most serious global issues which dangers our lives because of human activities. According to recent figures, more than 2 million of people die each day for by air pollution. We have to change our attitude and actions before it is too late. We need to plan useful solutions and plans to do them. with air pollution, walking, riding or using public transportation will reduce carbon emission. If we do this, there will be fewer cars and less fumes. Turn off fans, lights, air conditioners when you we do not use them beacause fossil fuels are also burnt to produce electricity. Plant more trees for absorbing cabon dioxide and releasing oxygen. They play a significant part on improving our air quality. Industrial companies need to install systems that reduce exhaust emission as well as clean polluted water. Goverment should invest in clean energy such as solar and wind energy. Water and land contamination are issues we have to care about. We have to throw rubbish in the correct places, limit using pesticides farming.Goverment need to apply more strict rules to prevent littering. We also should try to get into the habit of buying second-hand clothes or used items. Finally, each person should research more information about the environment pollution and the importance of stopping pollution. Please save our Earth!

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