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Just Good Friend - Chapter 1 I started read a book today and chapter 1 finished.I want to summarize this chapter. Max and Stephany falled in love before 2 months ago.They met at jazz cafe and become lover.Stephany is a laungage teacher.She likes going to parties, clubs and doing sports.Max is a architect.He want to serious reletionship.He enjoy looking at paintings and buildings.They want to go holiday and there is a option.Carlos is friends Stephang's.He lives in Italy and stephany want going in here.Stephany and Carlos met before 5 year ago.Max isnt want going in here.

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Just Good Friends - Chapter 1

I started reading a book today and finished chapter 1 finished.I want to summarize this chapter.

Max and Stephany falled fell in love before 2 months ago. They met at a jazz cafe and became lovers. Stephany is a laungage teacher. She likes going to parties, clubs and playing doing sports. Max is an architect. He wants a to serious reletionship. He enjoys looking at paintings and buildings. They want to go on holiday and there is an option. Carlos is friends with  Stephany g's. He lives in Italy and Stephany wants to go going in there. Stephany and Carlos met before 5 years ago. Max doesn't isnt want to go to Italy. going in here.

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Just Good Friends - Chapter 1

I started reading a book today and I have finished Chapter 1. I want to summarize this chapter.

Max and Stephany fell  in love 2 months ago.They met at a jazz cafe and became lovers. Stephany is a language teacher. She likes going to parties and clubs and doing sports. Max is an architect. He wants a serious relationship. He enjoys looking at paintings and buildings.

Max and Stephany want to go on holiday and they have a choice. Stephany has a friend Carlos, who lives in Italy, and Stephany wants to go there. (Stephany and Carlos met 5 years ago.)

Max doesn't want to make the trip.


Emre, when you type punctuation marks (period, comma, etc.) remember to put 0 space before and 1 space after each mark. For example:

Wrong: teacher.She

Right: teacher. She












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Just Good Friend - Chapter 1

I started reading a book today and have just finished chapter 1. I want to summarize this chapter:

Max and Stephany fell  in love 2 months ago.They met at a jazz cafe and became lovers. Stephany is a laungage teacher. She likes going to parties, clubs and doing sports. Max is an architect. He wants a serious reletionship. He enjoys looking at paintings and buildings.They want to go on holiday together. Carlos is Stephany's friend. He lives in Italy and Stephany wants to go there. Stephany and Carlos met before 5 year ago. Max doesn't want to go there.


Well done, this is a nice little introduction to the story.

Please pay attention to 

'a architect' in English we try not to have two vowels meeting at the end and the start of a word so it should be an architect.

you also got here and there confused: try this article for more help ^_^

http://esl.about.com/od/thebasics/a/this_that_these_those_determiners.htm

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Just Good Friend - Chapter 1

I started to read a book today and I have (already) finished chapter 1 finished. I want to summary summarize this chapter.

Max and Stephany falled fell in love before 2 months ago. They met at a jazz cafe and became lovers. Stephany is a language teacher. She likes going to parties, clubs and doing sports. Max is an architect. He wants to a serious reletionship. He enjoys looking at paintings and buildings.They want to go on holiday and there is an option. Carlos is a friend of Stephany's friends Stephang's. He lives in Italy and Stephany wants going in here to go there, too. Stephany and Carlos met before 5 years ago. Max isnt doesn't want going to go in here there.
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Just Good Friend - Chapter 1

I started read a book today and chapter 1 finished.I want to summarize this chapter.

Max and Stephany falled fell in love before 2 months ago.They met at jazz cafe and become became lovers.Stephany is a laungage language teacher.She likes going to parties, clubs and doing sports.Max is an architect. He wants to a serious reletionship. He enjoys looking at paintings and buildings. They want to go on holiday and there is an option (not a very natural way to say this. Maybe They have an option/opportunity).Carlos is friends with Stephang's. He lives in Italy and stephany wants going to go  in  here. Stephany and Carlos met before 5 year ago. Max isnt want going in here Max doesn't want to go there.

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