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A letter in reply Dear Red, I'm sorry to know that you are having such a bad time at the moment. In your letter you said that you were so easy to lose your temper and that has made your normal life difficult. In fact , many people always had growing problems when they were young, it's a normal phenomenon which not so hard to overcome, so don't be afraid of it. Here are some suggestions on how to get over it. Frist, try to calm yourself down when you're going to lose your temper, second, if you have lost your temper to someone, apologize to him or her ,and after then ,ask yourself the reason why , because it will clear your mind when you do that. You are welcome to write to me when you have any trouble next time. yours, Jamie (这篇小作文是以编辑的身份写给读者的回信,帮我改一下吧,十分感谢!)

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A letter in reply

Dear Red,
I'm sorry to know hear that you are having such a bad time at the moment.
In your letter you said that you were so easy to lose your temper easily and that has made your normal daily life difficult. In fact , many people always had experience growing problems when they were are young. It's a normal phenomenon which that is not so hard to overcome, so don't lose faith be afraid of it.
Here are some suggestions on how to get over overcome it. Frist First, try to calm yourself down when you're going about to lose your temper. Second, if you have lost your temper to at someone, apologize to him or her, and afterwards then ,ask yourself the reason why, because it will clear your mind when you do that.
You are welcome to write to me when you have any trouble next time.
Yours,
Jamie
(这篇小作文是以编辑的身份写给读者的回信,帮我改一下吧,十分感谢!)

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