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My article about Hongkong Hongkong is the third financial center of the global world after New York and London. It is undergo the"one country,two systems",and is famous for its excellent environment,freely financial system and well law system.As a mult-culture center,Hongkong is one of the region that the wealthiest ,the most prosperous,the safest and with the longest average lifetime.Also,Hongkong is the most important of the economic center and transport place in the world,it has a reputation of"a pearl of the eastern"Meanwhile,Hongkong is the most popular tourist places of global world.The tourism is one of the important industries in Hongkong.Lots of tourist places are welcomed by the traveller. (I write the English version by myself) the original as following: 香港是仅次于纽约和伦敦的全球第三大金融中心。香港实行“一国两制”,以良好的治安、自由的经济体系及完善的法制闻名于世,作为一个多元文化中心,香港是全球最富裕,最 繁荣,最安全及人均寿命最长的地区之一。香港也是世界上重要的经济中心和航运枢纽,有“东方明珠”的美誉。同时,香港还是全球最受欢迎的旅游胜地之一,旅游业是香港四大支柱产业之一,很多知名景点深受旅客欢迎。

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My article about Hong Kong:

Hong Kong is the third financial center of the global world, after New York and London. It is undergo the has implemented "one country, two systems", and is famous for its excellent environment, freely financial system economy and well law solid legal system. As a mult-culture multi-cultural center, Hong Kong is one of the a region that which is one of the wealthiest, the most prosperous, the safest and with has the longest average lifetime lifespan. Also, Hong Kong is the most important of the economic centers and transport place shipping hubs in the world, it has a reputation of being the "a pearl of the eastern Pearl of the East". Meanwhile, Hong Kong is one of the most popular tourist places of global in the world. The Tourism is one of the  most important industries in Hong Kong. Lots of tourist places sites are welcomed by the popular with travellers.

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