Eurasian penduline tit
Nests of the Eurasian penduline tit (Remiz pendulinus, Linnaeus, 1758) were discovered in April 2016 at the Batyrevsky cluster of the National Nature Reserve “Prisursky”. Two nests were located in the willow thickets above the water surface of a pond. One nest was likely from the previous year, and a male of the penduline tit was building the other. The nest was completed in two weeks. Habitats of the penduline tit were previously noted in four administrative districts of Chuvashia. The penduline tit habitat, which we have described, has not been known previously.
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Eurasian penduline tit
Nests of the Eurasian penduline tit (Remiz pendulinus, Linnaeus, 1758) were discovered in April 2016 at the Batyrevsky cluster (not sure how to correct this word because I'm not sure what's meant by cluster; but cluster definitely sounds a bit odd in this context) the “Prisursky” National Nature Reserve . Two nests were located in the willow thickets above the water surface of a pond. One nest was probably from the previous year, and a male of the penduline tit was building the other. The nest (which? - maybe say 'the former', or 'the latter') was completed in two weeks. Habitats of the penduline tit were previously noted in four administrative districts of Chuvashia. The penduline tit habitat which we have described was previously unknown.0
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Eurasian penduline tit
Nests of the Eurasian penduline tit (Remiz pendulinus, Linnaeus, 1758) were discovered in April 2016 at the Batyrevsky cluster (? portion/region ?) of the Prisursky National Nature Reserve. Two nests were located in the willow thickets above the water surface of overhanging a pond. One nest was likely from the previous year, and a male of the penduline tit was building the other. The second nest was completed in two weeks. Habitats of the penduline tit had previously been noted in four administrative districts of Chuvashia. The penduline tit habitat, which we have described, described above has only recently not been become known previously.I've made the changes to make it sound clearer and more natural, and have revised some grammar forms. Names of parks (for example) take the given name first, eg. Gorky Park.
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Hello Tina
Thank you for your answer. Nice to meet you.
I wrote this about nest which a male of penduline tit was bilding.
You can look at http://www.prisursky.ru/organizatciia/novosti/624-mister-h-zhivuschiy-v-varezhke-epizod-2.html
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The only correction I would make is to clarify which of the nests you are referring to when you say, "The nest was completed in two weeks."
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