A beautiful day with my friends
The last weekend I went to camp with my friends. We like the trees, the rivers and all the nature.
And we wanted play voleyball, but we played football because we took a hard baloon along.
We had a wonderful time. But I had sore throat because the weather was cloudy. We to laugh much and I didn't have a sweater.
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A beautiful day with my friends
The last weekend I went to camp with my friends. We like the trees, the rivers and all the nature.And we wanted play voleyball, but we played football because we took a hard baloon along.
We had a wonderful time. But I had sore throat because the weather was cloudy. We to laugh much and I didn't have a sweater.
Last weekend I went camping with my friends. We liked (seeing) the trees, the rivers, and all of nature.
We wanted to play volleyball, but instead we played football because we brought a hard ball along.
We had a wonderful time. But then I got a sore throat because the weather was cloudy, we laughed too much, and I didn't have a sweater.
You mainly have trouble with your verb tenses.
But overall, good job! Keep working at it! :D
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