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I'm going to talk about the time when my sister told me that she had bought me my first mobile phone more than a decade ago. At the time, she had been working on an assembly line in a textile enterprise in a neighboring province of my hometown, while I was a senior at university in a first-tier city. Of course, we were living far apart.
It was in the evening, when I was having dinner with my roommates in my hall of residence. I received a telephone, and it was from my sister. She said that as I needed a mobile to seek a job and my birthday was around the corner, she had brought one for my birthday, and it was in the mail. I was really on the cloud nine when I heard it, and I was so moved that I didn't know what to say on the phone.
As a matter of fact, most of my classmates had already had cell phones. I was really in need of a cell phone because I was busy looking for a job and needed to communicate with potential employers anywhere anytime.
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Good News I had
I'm going to talk about the time more than a decade ago, when my sister told me that she had bought me my first mobile phone more than a decade ago (我不确定这样写比原来写的更好,只是稍微感觉好一点而已). At the time, she had been working on an assembly line in a textile enterprise (company) in a neighboring province of my hometown, while I was a senior at university in a first-tier city. Of course, we were living far apart.It was in the evening, when I was having dinner with my roommates in my hall of residence residence hall/dorm. I received a telephone call, and it was from my sister. She said that as I needed a mobile to seek a job, and my birthday was around the corner, she had bought one for my birthday, and it was in the mail. I was really on the cloud nine when I heard it, and I was so moved that I didn't know what to say on the phone.
As a matter of fact, most of my classmates had already had cell phones. I was really in need of a cell phone because I was busy looking for a job and needed to communicate with potential employers anywhere, anytime (好像 anytime, anywhere 这个秩序更常用).
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