The good game
Hello,me friends.I want tell you about such interesting thing,like Assassin's Creed part two.
I have play in the first part,but I can't finished this game.Before this game I had play Bioshock Infinity(sorry,I don't know how correctly write the name of game) and I love this game.
I don't know what I can write yet.I'm really sorry about my mistakes
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The good game
Hello, my friends. I want to tell you about such an interesting thing. It is Assassin's Creed part two.I had played in the first part, but I could not finish it. Before this game I had played Bioshock Infinity (sorry, I don't know how to correctly write the name of game*) and I love it.
I don't know what I can write yet. I'm really sorry about my mistakes.
Very well written! Please use more pronouns.
*or, ...know how to correctly write it
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A good game
Hello my friends. I want to tell you about a really interesting game called Assassin's Creed part two.I have played the first part, but I haven't been able to finish the entire game. Before having played this one, I had played Bioshock Infinity (sorry, I don't know the correct spelling of the name) and I love it.
I don't know what I can write now. I'm really sorry about my mistakes.
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The good game
Hello, my friends.I want tell you about such interesting things, like Assassin's Creed part two.I have played in the first part,but I can't finished this the game.Before
I don't know what I can write yet. I'm really sorry about my mistakes
Great job writing. It's really good!
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