Correct it please (esto así, no suena muy amable porque suena como una orden)

Can somebody please correct this?

Each Every new government wants to establish its own education´s laws.

As a result, the education´s level is decreasing year by year/every year.

In the last few years, there has been a continual rise in dropout rates.

In the last few years the dropout rate has steadily increased. (yo diría esto)

The purpose of this report is to analyse the Spanish education system.

In the last ten years, the number of students who has have given up their studies , has risen significantly.

In fact, 70% of the primary pupils did not continue in to High School and only 50% of secondary students finished their degree/graduated last year. (en los EEUU "finish a degree" se refiere normalmente cuando alguien se gradúa de la universidad. I finished my degree = terminé la universidad con un título de...Cuando se termina la secundaria se dice, I graduated from high school. I got my high school degree.)

In fact, 70% of primary students did not continue to high school, and only 50% of secondary students graduated last year.

If we analyse the reason for this new trend, first, there seems to be a connection between the number of repeat students and the rate of school dropout/dropout school rate.

Repeaters suffer a strong lack of motivation and this finishes as a desertion of studies. (esto no se entiende...yo diría, and this leads to students abandoning their studies)

(nota, aunque entiendo que quieres decir con repeaters, por lo menos en los eeuu, a alguien quien repite un grado, no se le dice repeater, pero, failed a grade. Entonces yo diría en inglés, Students who fail a grade suffer a strong lack of motivation....Ahora, es interesante notar que con el movimiento de no ser negativos contra los estudiantes, ahora la gente dice, Students who did not pass a grade...en esta forma no se usa la palabra "fail" y así se evita ponerle el nombre de failers a estos estudiantes. Si la nueva generación de humanos es muy sensible :D )

In addition, teachers and parents encourage them to study because they think that the students can study but they don not want to do it.
It is true that adolescents would prefer playing computer games than staying in the school. Nevertheless, LONCE (a new education law) is going to get worsen this situation with more exams and more difficult subjects.

In conclusion, now not seems doesn't seem to be a good time to become a university student.

As I see it, the most potential biggest problem is that young people need more motivation and in times of crisis when finding a job is practically impossible, the lack of motivation is too significant.