Firsrt rounding of golf
Weather was nice I had expected and body condition was also great. Country club was not far from here in my place. It took a 2 hours by car. We made a pit stop along the way and had some snacks. When we arrived CC I was a little nervous because of first time I've ever been. Whole courses were 18 holes and devided each 9 holes. There were 2 concepts of each holes called by dragon and pine. Caddy in there was very kind of us but score was mess. :( I made myself a promise to practice more harder then I did. The game ended and we took a shower rapidly because of a hunger.
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Firsrt rounding round of golf
The weather was as nice as I had expected and my body condition was also great. The country club was not far from here in my place. It took a 2 hours by car. We made a pit stop along the way and had some snacks. When we arrived at the CC I was a little nervous because it was my first time there of first time I've ever been. Whole courses were 18 holes and devided each 9 holes (Can you describe this more? ). There were 2 concepts of each holes called by dragon and pine.(Can you describe this? Were the courses named "dragon" and "pine?) The caddy in there was very kind of to us ,but he messed up the score was mess. :( I made myself a promise to practice more harder then I did ("I did" means that this game was also practice, but it sounds like it was a real game). The game ended and we took a shower rapidly because of a hunger. (Can you help describe this? You should explain more how you took a very quick shower so that you could grab food so that you more closely connect "the rapid shower" and the "hunger" you mentioned)Want to progress faster?
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