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I disagree that only people who earn a lot of money are successful People love talking about succeeding, and some people think the only sign of successful is earn big money. But I believe, that is not ture, I think there is more better way to get success. To begin with, we have learned many stories about those great scientist, most of them are not wealthy, but their study and inventions changed our life tremendously, their name and splendid stories have been written in our book and chanted generation, every of us respect to them, there is no doubt they are the most successful people. Besides, doctors are another sample, instead of looking for ways to make money, they are busy to helping their patient and saving peoples life, they don’t have the highest salary, but their works makes them more successful than the richer. Then who will be the next sample? Maybe you and me, because a very important way to get success is making your family happiness, a man just need to take care of their consort, look after their children and make sure they are fulfilled, then they are definitely successful. All in all, money are good, but if you think that is the only way to get success , your are making a big mistake.

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I disagree that only people who earn a lot of money are successful

People love talking about succeeding, and some people think the only sign of success is to earn big money. But I do not believe that is true. I think there is a better way to get success.

To begin with, we have heard many stories about those great scientists, most of whom were not wealthy, but their study and inventions changed our lives tremendously. Their names and splendid stories have been written in our books and sung of through the generations. We all respect them and there is no doubt they are the most successful people.

Also, doctors are another example. Instead of looking for ways to make money, they are busy helping their patients and saving their lives. They don’t have the highest salary, but their works makes them more successful than rich people's.

Then who will be the next example? Maybe you and me, because a very important way to get success is by making your family happy. A man just needs to take care of his spouse and look after his children and make sure they are fulfilled. Then he is definitely successful.

All in all, money are good, but if you think that is the only way to get success , your are making a big mistake.

Very well written!

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