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Ultrasound Screenings Hello everybody, this witting is about: Do ultrasound screenings spoil the surprise of a new baby? (B2 level). Nowadays technology progress very fast. We are able to chat with other person in other country, knowing the position of the Stars and see a baby unborned on a screen, of course. There are more advantages about watching a fetus on a screen, we are able to know with accuracy the due data, have a medical information about the fetus and we are able to know the gender too. This is fascinating, arround the six month of pregnancy we know that is a boy and we start to buy a blue bed with blue dressbed and many of blue clothes... Moreover we tell to our family the gender of the fetus and everybody is exciting. But, what happens at the due date? Is a girl! There is not a problem, we are very happy too. To finish, the foult is no of the techology, it only shows pictures. The thecnicians might read better the information that techology show them. Thanks for correct!! Bye.

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Ultrasound Screenings

Hello everybody, this witting is about the topic of this entry is: Do ultrasound screenings spoil the surprise of a new baby? (B2 level).

Nowadays technology progresses very fast. We are able to chat with other another person in other another country, knowing the position of the Stars and see a baby unborned an unborn baby on a screen, of course.

There are more advantages about watching a fetus on a screen, we are able to know predict with accuracy the due data due date, have a acquire medical information about the fetus and we are able to know the gender too.
This is fascinating, around the six months of pregnancy we know that is it's a boy and we start to buy a blue bed with blue dressbed dresser and many of  other blue clothes... Moreover we tell to our family the gender of the fetus and everybody is exciting excited.
But, what happens at the due date? Is It's a girl!
There isThis isn't a problem, we are very happy too.
To finish, the fault is no of the techology it's not the technology's fault; it only shows pictures. The technicians might read better the information that technology shows them better.

Thanks for corrections!! Bye.


Ok, in English: "Otro" is either "other" OR "another." For example:

"I don't want that one, I want the other one."

"I already have one, but I want another one"

"Which other countries speak English besides England?"

"I want to move to another country."

I hope this helps.


Also, "es" is either "is" OR "it's." For example:

"It's raining today."

"Is the rain gonna stop soon?"

"Fire is hot."

"It's not hard to walk in a park; it's easy."


Again, I hope this helps.


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Ultrasound Screenings

Hello everybody,

This entry is entitled: Do ultrasound screenings spoil the surprise of a new baby? (B2 level).

Nowadays (Nowadays isn't incorrect, but I'd use 'These days' here) technology progresses very quickly. We are able to chat with a person in another country, know the position of the stars and see an unborn baby on a screen.

There are many advantages to being able to see a fetus (fetus is acceptable for US English, in the Commonwealth it's foetus) on a screen. We are able to know, with accuracy, the date the baby is due, gain medical information about the fetus and we are able to learn the gender too. This is fascinating. Around the sixth month of pregnancy we are able to know that it is a boy so we can buy a blue bed with blue bedsheets and many blue clothes. Moreover, (Again, acceptable, but you might find 'Furthermore' is more commonly used) we can tell our family the gender of the fetus and everyone can get excited.


What happens when the child is born and it is a girl? This isn't a problem, we are still very happy.


In summary, the technology is not to blame; it can only show images. The technicians should be able to analyse the information accurately.


Thanks for the corrections. Bye.

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