30天中文写作挑战 (3/30) - 我的学业

在昨天的文章里， 我介绍到我去年大学毕业了，今天我要说说我的学业。
刚刚高中毕业，我去过美国。高中一毕业，我就去了美国。我一个年在一个美国高中学习了一年，住在一个美国家庭里， 他们都很热情！
然后我回到法国 回到法国之后，我进入 参加了一个"Classe préparatoire aux grandes écoles"课程。我觉得这种课只存在法国 在法国出现。这是两年课，那里你准备考入对商学院。 这是一个准备商务学院录取考试的两年课程。先有书面的考试，之后有口试。我进入了巴黎近的对商学院。 我被一个在巴黎附近的商学院录取了。
第一和第二的年纪是共同课程 第一年和第二年是普通课程，学习比如问责性 会计责任，市场营销，人力资源管理和财经方面的知识。
第三年纪是专业的年纪。 第三年是专业课程。我的专业是数码营销。我学徒了，所以我上课和上班。是很有意思。 我以学徒身份上课，所以我一边上课一边工作，非常有意思。



This is the third day of my challenge, I would be very pleased if you can help me correct it. Below is the English translation of what I wanted to say :

In yesterday's article, I explained that I have finished school one year ago. Today, I want to talk about my studies. Just after graduating from high school, I went to the USA. I studied there in an American high school during a year. I lived in an american family, they were all very nice ! After I came back to France, I entered one "Classe préparatoire aux grandes écoles". I think this kind of classes only exist in France. It is a two years class where you prepare business school entrance exam. First there are writing examination, then there are oral examination. I entered a business school near Paris. The first
and second year of school were common courses, for example accountability, marketing, human resources management, finance. The third year is the year of specialization. My specialization was digital marketing. I was doing an apprenticeship, so I had classes and I had a job. It was very interesting.

我昨天曾说过我去年大学毕业了，今天，我想聊聊我的学业。

我高中刚毕业之后，我去了美国，我在美国的高中学习了一年，当时我寄宿在一个美国人的家里，他们都很热情！

之后我回到法国，我参加了一个课程名叫“Classe préparatoire aux grandes écoles”。我觉得只有法国才有这种课程。这个课程为期两年，主要针对于商学院入学考试的备考。其中包括笔试和口试。我最终考入了一所巴黎附近的商学院。

大一大二主要是公共课，例如会计，营销，人力资源管理，财经。

大三是专业课。我的专业是数码营销。我成为了一名学徒，上课的同时实习。我认为这很有意思。

Comme hier, il y a deux corrections déjà données, donc je te donne une amélioration. 

Une question, pour le mot acoutability, je crois la vérision correcte est 会计 mais je ne suis pas sûre. 

This is the third day of my challenge, I would be very pleased if you can help me correct it. Below is the English translation of what I wanted to say :

In yesterday's article, I explained that I have finished school one year ago. Today, I want to talk about my studies. Just after graduating from high school, I went to the USA. I studied there in an American high school during a year. I lived in an american family, they were all very nice ! After I came back to France, I entered one "Classe préparatoire aux grandes écoles". I think this kind of classes only exist in France. It is a two years class where you prepare business school entrance exam. First there are writing examination, then there are oral examination. I entered a business school near Paris. The first
and second year of school were common courses, for example accountability, marketing, human resources management, finance. The third year is the year of specialization. My specialization was digital marketing. I was doing an apprenticeship, so I had classes and I had a job. It was very interesting.

Hi, I tried to make comments based on your English composition. Please check accordingly, in case I misunderstood.

30天中文写作挑战 (3/30) - 我的学业

30天中文写作挑战 (3/30) - 我的学业

高中毕业后，我去美国读了一年高中。（我觉得“我去过美国”意思重复，可以删掉）

我住在一个美国家， 他们都很热情！
然后我回到法国，我参加进入了一个名为"Classe préparatoire aux grandes écoles"的课程。我觉得这种课只存在法国。这是两年课为期两年，在那里你准备考入对商学院的入学考试。先有书面的考试，之后有口试。 我先后通过了笔试和面试，我进入了巴黎附近的对商学院。
第一和第二的年纪是共同课程，前两年都是学习基础课程，比如问责性（我不知道有没有accountability这门课，但我觉得你是不是想说accounting 会计？），营销，人力资源管理， 财经。
第三年纪是专业课的年纪学习。我的专业是数码营销。同时我学徒参加了实习，所以我一边上课和一边上班。是很有意思。



This is the third day of my challenge, I would be very pleased if you can help me correct it. Below is the English translation of what I wanted to say :

In yesterday's article, I explained that I have finished school one year ago. Today, I want to talk about my studies. Just after graduating from high school, I went to the USA. I studied there in an American high school during a year. I lived in an american family, they were all very nice ! After I came back to France, I entered one "Classe préparatoire aux grandes écoles". I think this kind of classes only exist in France. It is a two years class where you prepare business school entrance exam. First there are writing examination, then there are oral examination. I entered a business school near Paris. The first
and second year of school were common courses, for example accountability, marketing, human resources management, finance. The third year is the year of specialization. My specialization was digital marketing. I was doing an apprenticeship, so I had classes and I had a job. It was very interesting.