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A restaurant near my house Everytime my mom comes to visit us, she would bring some meat balls to us. She made them by herself. Commonly, the meat ball was made of meat and champignons. I've had meat ball soup for my lunch for several times recently. There is a small restaurant near my house. The meat ball there is very delicious. Many people from all parts of Xiamen come here to have it's meat ball for at least three reasons. First ,it's food is very delicious and fresh. Second, the restanrant's service is very good. The third but not the least, the restaurant looks very clean and comfortable.

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A restaurant near (to) my house

Overtime (When) my mom comes to visit us, she would bring some meatballs to us ( with her)  {You can you with her instead, because you mentioned the word us twice }. She made them by herself. Commonly, the meatballs was were made of meat and champignons. I've had meatballs soup for my lunch for several times recently. There is a small restaurant near to my house. The meat ball there is  They have avery delicious meatballs . Many people from all parts of Xiamen come here to try their meatball or at least for three reasons. First ,its food is very delicious and fresh. Second, the restaurant's service is very good. The third but not the least,  the restaurant's atmosphere is very comfortable and it looks very clean.
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A restaurant near my house

Everytime my mom comes to visit us, she would brings some meat balls to us. She made makes them by herself. Commonly, Usually the meat balls was are made of meat and champignons. I've had meat ball soup for my lunch for several times recently. There is a small restaurant near my house. The meat ball there is very delicious. Many people from all parts of Xiamen come here to have it's meat balls for at least three reasons. First, it's food is very delicious and fresh. Second, the restaurant's service is very good. The Third but not the least, the restaurant looks very clean and comfortable.

 

Good job, just watch your past or present voice.

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A restaurant near my house

Every time my mom comes to visit us, she brings some meatballs to us. She makes them by herself. Usually, the meatball is made of meat and mushrooms. I've had meatball soup for lunch a lot lately. There is a small restaurant near my house. The meatballs there are very delicious. Many people from all parts of Xiamen come here to have their meatballs for at least three reasons. First, the food is very delicious and fresh. Second, the restaurant's service is very good. And last but not least, the restaurant looks very clean and comfortable.
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nice story :)

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