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THE BENEFITS OF MUSIC. Sentences/Gaps. would you like to correct this for me, please? So it is CONCERNED that teaches round the world find they have to battle to incorparte it into the classroom. Learning to play an instrument has a demonstrable EFFECT t on intelleggence and, when children paly music together, it teaches them about co-operation. Music helps concetration , aids relaxation and can influence MOODS AND EMOTIONS. l listening to music is rewarding for children. Music serve AS a source of support for troubled teenagers. Singing in groups enhances the immune SYSTEM, AND there are lower mortality rates in people who ATTEND OR ASSIT.

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THE BENEFITS OF MUSIC. Sentences/Gaps. would you like to correct this for me, please?

So it is CONCERNING that teachers round the world find they have to battle to incorporate it into the classroom.
Learning to play an instrument has a demonstrable EFFECT on intelleggence and, when children play music together, it teaches them about co-operation.
Music helps concentration , aids relaxation and can influence MOODS AND EMOTIONS.
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listening to music is rewarding for children.
Music serves AS a source of support for troubled teenagers. Singing in groups enhances the immune SYSTEM, AND there are lower mortality rates in people who ATTEND OR ASSIST. (1)

1 assist  el uso de "assist" como "attend" es casi arcaico en inglés. Hoy en día, "assist" casi siempre signifca "ayudar".

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THE BENEFITS OF MUSIC. Sentences/Gaps. would you like to correct this for me, please?

So it is CONCERNING that teaches around the world find they have to battle to incorparte music into the classroom.
Learning to play an instrument has a demonstrable EFFECT on intellegence, and when children play music together, it teaches them about co-operation.
Music helps concetration , aids relaxation and can influence MOODS AND EMOTIONS.
l
listening to music is rewarding for children.
Music serve AS a source of support for troubled teenagers. Singing in groups enhances the immune SYSTEM, AND there are lower mortality rates in people who ATTEND OR ASISIT.

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