30天写字 文章挑战 (2/30) - 去上班
我一年前完了大学。我现在是一个项目经理。我实施软件，和也帮变更网站。
我的班有六个人，一个上司，两个项目经理和三个开发人员。除了我，他们都是工程师。
我的公司有一个运动协会。我每星期两次做空手道。
我家离公司，我在路上有一个小时。我坐地铁。在坐地铁的时候，我看书还是学中文。
Hi, here is day two of my challenge ! Thank you very much for your corrections. Please find below what I am trying to say in Chinese :
I finished university one year ago. Now, I am a project manager. I implement computer software and I help modify websites. There are six people in my team, one team manager, two project managers and three developers. Except me, they are all engineers.My company has a sport association. Every week, I do two times of karate. From my house to the company, it takes me one hour of transportation. I take the subway. While in the subway, I read books or I learn Chinese.
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30天写字 文章挑战 (2/30) - 去上班
我一年前上完了大学。我现在是一个项目经理。我实施软件，和也做变更网站的工作。我的班有六个人，一个上司，两个项目经理和三个开发人员。除了我，他们都是工程师。
我的公司有一个运动协会。我每星期两次做练空手道。
我家离公司，我在路上有一个小时路程。我坐地铁。在坐地铁的时候，我看书还是也学中文。
Hi, here is day two of my challenge ! Thank you very much for your corrections. Please find below what I am trying to say in Chinese :
I finished university one year ago. Now, I am a project manager. I implement computer software and I help modify websites. There are six people in my team, one team manager, two project managers and three developers. Except me, they are all engineers.My company has a sport association. Every week, I do two times of karate. From my house to the company, it takes me one hour of transportation. I take the subway. While in the subway, I read books or I learn Chinese.
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30天写字 文章挑战 (2/30) - 去上班
30天中文写作挑战 （2/30)-去上班 （写字强调动作， 这里用写作或作文更好， 后面“文章”可删去，意思重复）
我一年前完了大学。我一年前读完了大学/我一年前毕业我现在是一个项目经理。
我实施软件，和也帮变更网站。我负责软件安装，也帮助维护网站 （我猜想你工作应该不仅只是变更网站， 而是包括各种与网站想关的维护工作。所以我改成了维护）
我的班有六个人，一个上司，两个项目经理和三个开发人员。除了我，他们都是工程师。
我的公司有一个运动协会。我每星期两次做空手道。我每星期练习两次空手道
我家离公司，我在路上有一个小时。我坐地铁。我坐地铁上班，需要一个小时 （一般我们都是从家里去公司上班，所以没必要写我家离公司多远）
在坐地铁的时候，
我看书还是学中文。我看书或者学中文/我要么看书要么学中文
Hi, here is day two of my challenge ! Thank you very much for your corrections. Please find below what I am trying to say in Chinese :
I finished university one year ago. Now, I am a project manager. I implement computer software and I help modify websites. There are six people in my team, one team manager, two project managers and three developers. Except me, they are all engineers.My company has a sport association. Every week, I do two times of karate. From my house to the company, it takes me one hour of transportation. I take the subway. While in the subway, I read books or I learn Chinese.
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我一年前大学毕业，现在是一名项目经理，我负责软件的开发和网站维护。
我有五个同事和一个上司，五个同事里，有两个项目经理和开发人员。除了我，他们都是工程师。
我的公司里有一个运动组织，我每周在那儿练两次空手道。
从我家到公司需要乘一个小时地铁，在地铁上我会看书或者学中文。
Puisqu'il y avait déjà des corrections, donc je te donne une amélioration.
Il faut faire attention à ces deux mots, 和, 或者
le premier veut dire plutôt et
et le deuxième veut dire ou.
J'espère que je peux t'aider!
Bravo à apprendre le chinois en métro! C'est vraiment une bonne idée! Peut-être la prochaine fois je essayerai d'apprendre le français en métro! Haha
Hi, here is day two of my challenge ! Thank you very much for your corrections. Please find below what I am trying to say in Chinese :
I finished university one year ago. Now, I am a project manager. I implement computer software and I help modify websites. There are six people in my team, one team manager, two project managers and three developers. Except me, they are all engineers.My company has a sport association. Every week, I do two times of karate. From my house to the company, it takes me one hour of transportation. I take the subway. While in the subway, I read books or I learn Chinese.
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30天写字 文章挑战 (2/30) - 去上班
我一年前完了大学毕业。我现在是一个项目经理。我实施软件，和也帮做变更网站的工作。我的班团队有六个人，一个上司，两个项目经理和三个开发人员。除了我，他们都是工程师。
我的公司有一个运动协会。我每星期两次做练空手道。
我家距离公司，我在路上有一个小时。我坐地铁。在坐地铁的时候，我看书并且学中文。
Hi, here is day two of my challenge ! Thank you very much for your corrections. Please find below what I am trying to say in Chinese :
I finished university one year ago. Now, I am a project manager. I implement computer software and I help modify websites. There are six people in my team, one team manager, two project managers and three developers. Except me, they are all engineers.My company has a sport association. Every week, I do two times of karate. From my house to the company, it takes me one hour of transportation. I take the subway. While in the subway, I read books or I learn Chinese.
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30天写字 文章挑战 (2/30) - 去上班
我一年前完了大学 (我一年前自大學畢業/我一年前完成了大學學業) 。 我现在是一个项目经理 (專案經理)。 我实施软件 (負責安裝軟體)，和也帮变更网站 (也幫忙維護網站/也協助網站維護)。我的班有六个人 (我的團隊有六個人)，一个上司，两个项目经理 (專案經理)和三个开发人员。除了我，他们(其他)都是工程师。
我的公司有一个运动协会。我每星期两次做空手道 (我每個星期練習兩次空手道)。
我家离公司，我在路上有一个小时 。我坐地铁 (從我家到公司需要搭一個小時的地鐵) 。在坐地铁的时候，我(會)看书还(或)是学中文。
Hi, here is day two of my challenge ! Thank you very much for your corrections. Please find below what I am trying to say in Chinese :
I finished university one year ago. Now, I am a project manager. I implement computer software and I help modify websites. There are six people in my team, one team manager, two project managers and three developers. Except me, they are all engineers.My company has a sport association. Every week, I do two times of karate. From my house to the company, it takes me one hour of transportation. I take the subway. While in the subway, I read books or I learn Chinese.
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