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Quick Approval! Last week I talked to many coworkers to gain corporations for my projects. Especially, I had a two hours long meeting with three coworkers from IT system department. I explained two projects. The first one is to incorporate a CMS(Content Management System) to a corporate website and to redesign it. The second one is also to incorporate a CMS into the intranet websites and to redesign it. Then, we discussed how to proceed these projects in detail. We almost completed the plan for the early stage of the projects. I can say it really went well. This morning I submitted several documents for approval on the intranet. Actually, my supervisor is the CEO. After lunch, I noticed that the CEO gave all my documents approval. I said in my mind, " Wow! He did it unbelievably quick!" I was happy since it took a long time to get approval from the CEO at my former job . I had to urge him a few times. In addition, he gave approval to my request that I asked to provide me a Microsoft Surface 3 with WiFi connection for my PR activities outside the office.

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Quick Approval!

Last week I talked to many of my coworkers to gain corporations (This does not make sense. Were you wanting your coworkers opinions for the project?) for my projects.

Especially For example, I had a two hours long meeting with three coworkers from IT system department. I explained two of my projects.

The My first one project is to incorporate a CMS(Content Management System) to a corporate website and too redesign it.

The second one project is also to incorporate a CMS into the intranet websites and too redesign it.

Then, we discussed in detail how to proceed  with these projects in detail. We almost completed the plan for the early stage of the projects. I can say it really went really well.

This morning I submitted several documents for approval on the intranet. Actually, my supervisor is the CEO.

After lunch, I noticed that the my supervisor, the CEO, gave all my documents approval.

I said in my mind, "Wow! He did it unbelievably quick!"

I was happy since it took a long time to get approval from the CEO at my former job . I had to urge him a few times.

In addition, he gave approval to for my request that I asked to provide me with a Microsoft Surface 3 with WiFi connection for my PR activities outside the office.

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This is really good! The only issue is that I am not sure what you are meaning in the first sentence after the title. Feel free to ask me if you have any questions.

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Last week I talked to many coworkers to gain their co-operation

In addition, he gave approval approved my request that I asked  to provide me with a Microsoft Surface 3 with WiFi connection for my PR activities outside the office.   Surface 3 or Surface 3 Pro?  The Pro is much better.  The "type cover" keyboard is highly recommended.

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